for How To Catch A Cold With A Butterfly Net6/6/2012 c1 Anonymous Person
Amazing job! Your description and detail were very thorough throughout your poem! You included a lot of descriptive writing in it also! I also appreciate how much hardd work and time you put into it! From 1-10, I would say 100.9299.
Amazing job! Your description and detail were very thorough throughout your poem! You included a lot of descriptive writing in it also! I also appreciate how much hardd work and time you put into it! From 1-10, I would say 100.9299.
6/2/2012 c1 
4amai-ladyaika
Bwahaha! XD I loved that! that was pretty funny. I liked how she ended up catching her cold in the end, happy as a clam. It was too funny when she realized her net was too small
4amai-ladyaikaBwahaha! XD I loved that! that was pretty funny. I liked how she ended up catching her cold in the end, happy as a clam. It was too funny when she realized her net was too small
6/1/2012 c1 18Bushwah
Weird but... wow. It is so free it's flying out the window. Have you read Douglas Adams, ever? This is like that.
Thanx for reviewing my story!
18BushwahWeird but... wow. It is so free it's flying out the window. Have you read Douglas Adams, ever? This is like that.
Thanx for reviewing my story!
5/30/2012 c1 11Reiz16
Yay! :D Thank you for giving credit to me!
I like how this one had more violence than your former poems. How they thought the butterfly net was an axe, or how you made that guy dissapear, saying you, yourself are a tyrant!
Then they all randomly died. :P
Thank you for adding me as your favorite author, btw! (Although, sometimes I may write things you may not enjoy.)
If you're wondering how I came up w/ the idea, I was actually the sick girl. (Although, not w/ a cold...)
And you said you are allergic to Mott's? It actually hurts me to pee, whenever I eat Mott's apples slices, or drink Mott's apple juice! (Freaky... Yay :D) Its b/c they put too much vitamin C in them!
11Reiz16Yay! :D Thank you for giving credit to me!
I like how this one had more violence than your former poems. How they thought the butterfly net was an axe, or how you made that guy dissapear, saying you, yourself are a tyrant!
Then they all randomly died. :P
Thank you for adding me as your favorite author, btw! (Although, sometimes I may write things you may not enjoy.)
If you're wondering how I came up w/ the idea, I was actually the sick girl. (Although, not w/ a cold...)
And you said you are allergic to Mott's? It actually hurts me to pee, whenever I eat Mott's apples slices, or drink Mott's apple juice! (Freaky... Yay :D) Its b/c they put too much vitamin C in them!