
12/18/2017 c4
9MaskedNightingale
Glad to see into Loki's world a bit. I would love to read more of the tale.

Glad to see into Loki's world a bit. I would love to read more of the tale.
11/30/2017 c4 REGRETABLE
Ok - THIS is my kind of story. It's been years (literally) - but PLEASE come back!
Your writing style is wonderful, between describing the setting, dialogue, and the interactions between the characters, it is really a shame you haven't been updating.
PLEASE COME BACK!
Please?
Ok - THIS is my kind of story. It's been years (literally) - but PLEASE come back!
Your writing style is wonderful, between describing the setting, dialogue, and the interactions between the characters, it is really a shame you haven't been updating.
PLEASE COME BACK!
Please?
10/18/2014 c4 kiki19857
Very nice story... I still hope that the girl will be able to visit her family soon
Very nice story... I still hope that the girl will be able to visit her family soon
9/5/2013 c3 Trelunas
This story is pretty interesting so far. I think I might even like it more than the "Through the Stone Archway" story. I am looking forward to your next update (if you haven't discontinued it already).
This story is pretty interesting so far. I think I might even like it more than the "Through the Stone Archway" story. I am looking forward to your next update (if you haven't discontinued it already).
11/11/2012 c3 The Phoenix Girl
I was hoping Loki was the one knocking on the door and that he came to save Sara :)
Love your story!
I was hoping Loki was the one knocking on the door and that he came to save Sara :)
Love your story!
11/8/2012 c3
7gulistala
Wait wasn't the blonde she saw Loki? Can't wait to read more, how much time has passed between Alisa and Sara? And who is Sara's grandmother?

Wait wasn't the blonde she saw Loki? Can't wait to read more, how much time has passed between Alisa and Sara? And who is Sara's grandmother?
6/2/2012 c2 missrissa
Ahhh, i'm excited for this! :)
Ahhh, i'm excited for this! :)