for The evil within4/16/2013 c1 
11Electric Poet Club
Wow this is really good. I like how it makes the evil within seem alive. Well done!
11Electric Poet ClubWow this is really good. I like how it makes the evil within seem alive. Well done!
4/16/2013 c1 Guest
Your wirting is awesome!
-TheBlackSheep1772
(School Computer)
Your wirting is awesome!
-TheBlackSheep1772
(School Computer)
9/9/2012 c1 28CreativeGal125
Wow, this poem is really good! In a way I can relate, having something evil coming into your life and making you feel so bad. :) I like it, I wish I could write like that.
28CreativeGal125Wow, this poem is really good! In a way I can relate, having something evil coming into your life and making you feel so bad. :) I like it, I wish I could write like that.
6/5/2012 c1 14Utada Rumiko
Very well-written! The last line definitely left an impression on me. Definitely talented work. Keep it up!
14Utada RumikoVery well-written! The last line definitely left an impression on me. Definitely talented work. Keep it up!