7/15/2012 c4 chibikodo
I wonder... Did Bishop have the opportunity to help Beau but left him? And how will Marcus react finding out the truth of whatever it really is that happened between Bishop and Beau? The pirates are as strange as the people the duo are traveling with. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
I wonder... Did Bishop have the opportunity to help Beau but left him? And how will Marcus react finding out the truth of whatever it really is that happened between Bishop and Beau? The pirates are as strange as the people the duo are traveling with. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
7/12/2012 c4 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Oh I really like reading about Beau, I want to know more about him!
Your action scenes are *really* good, I'm really enjoying this:) (I wanted to read yesterday but time is against me at the moment!)
Sukix
Oh I really like reading about Beau, I want to know more about him!
Your action scenes are *really* good, I'm really enjoying this:) (I wanted to read yesterday but time is against me at the moment!)
Sukix
7/1/2012 c3 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
'This coffee drink. It would never catch on. Mark my words.' ah that's good XD
'Look at me. Turn your face and look at me. Only at me.' I think this line says so much about Bishop's character!
I'm so so curious about Beau, and what Bishop feels so guilty about, and I'm really enjoying Bishop's POV!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Suki
'This coffee drink. It would never catch on. Mark my words.' ah that's good XD
'Look at me. Turn your face and look at me. Only at me.' I think this line says so much about Bishop's character!
I'm so so curious about Beau, and what Bishop feels so guilty about, and I'm really enjoying Bishop's POV!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Suki
6/30/2012 c3 2Bananafishh
Couldn't you say if it's Bishop's POV at the start so we can know whose voice we're hearing? If its at the end I'd have to reread it every time. Thanks xxx
Couldn't you say if it's Bishop's POV at the start so we can know whose voice we're hearing? If its at the end I'd have to reread it every time. Thanks xxx
6/27/2012 c2 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Oh I always love reading about these two!
'The Agency viewed hunters like Ben, my grandpa or I as expandable' think you might mean expendable?
'My mouth was a man on a horse, while my head was another man riding a bicycle forever trying to catch up with the horse.' that's a great description! XD
Looking forward to more!
Suki
Oh I always love reading about these two!
'The Agency viewed hunters like Ben, my grandpa or I as expandable' think you might mean expendable?
'My mouth was a man on a horse, while my head was another man riding a bicycle forever trying to catch up with the horse.' that's a great description! XD
Looking forward to more!
Suki
6/21/2012 c1 crystalcleardestiny
I adored the first story about mark and bishop and I hope that you decide to continue this sequel as it promises to be as wonderful as the first.
I adored the first story about mark and bishop and I hope that you decide to continue this sequel as it promises to be as wonderful as the first.
6/12/2012 c1 Winterz
Id really like for you to continue! I just finished reading the tide jewel and I love it! Knowing youre doing a sequel, this one, makes me jump for joy. Your writing style is so enjoyable. I laughed and smiled through the prequel and even the sad emotions flickered in the correct parts. Id just absolutely love to read more of what you offer. Good luck :)
Id really like for you to continue! I just finished reading the tide jewel and I love it! Knowing youre doing a sequel, this one, makes me jump for joy. Your writing style is so enjoyable. I laughed and smiled through the prequel and even the sad emotions flickered in the correct parts. Id just absolutely love to read more of what you offer. Good luck :)
6/11/2012 c1 Kibbsworld
Wah, the sequel! XD
I hope you continue this. I loved the first one and this one looks like it's shaping up to be as adorably amazing as the first. Mark and Bishop's relationship is adorable. Just a nice mix of calm and keeping each other on their toes. I like, I like a lot.
Can't wait for more :D
Wah, the sequel! XD
I hope you continue this. I loved the first one and this one looks like it's shaping up to be as adorably amazing as the first. Mark and Bishop's relationship is adorable. Just a nice mix of calm and keeping each other on their toes. I like, I like a lot.
Can't wait for more :D
6/8/2012 c1 nemo
Yay! another Marcus Seamus story.I love Marcus and Bishop. they're such funny couple. I love Marcus. He's like a little bunny thinking that he's a tiger or something. cute! please update
Yay! another Marcus Seamus story.I love Marcus and Bishop. they're such funny couple. I love Marcus. He's like a little bunny thinking that he's a tiger or something. cute! please update
6/6/2012 c1 xfffxfxfx
Cool story bro! I think I like this chapter more than any of the ones in the original story. The opening was amazing. It reminds me of a lot of good movies and shows. (And manga, now that I think of it.)
Cool story bro! I think I like this chapter more than any of the ones in the original story. The opening was amazing. It reminds me of a lot of good movies and shows. (And manga, now that I think of it.)
6/6/2012 c1 2Bananafishh
Omg Ben is a zombie :O! JK but dang really? Poor Ralph I say. Having to witness his friend turning into what I assume to ba a kraken. Great writing though! I just finished the first one and skipped to this instead of reading the last chapter of the first one in the hopes that therell be more than one chapter uploaded already. Oh well. I can't wait. Probably :o.
Omg Ben is a zombie :O! JK but dang really? Poor Ralph I say. Having to witness his friend turning into what I assume to ba a kraken. Great writing though! I just finished the first one and skipped to this instead of reading the last chapter of the first one in the hopes that therell be more than one chapter uploaded already. Oh well. I can't wait. Probably :o.
6/5/2012 c1 ineededaname
Yes please continue this story. I look forward to reading more of this.
Yes please continue this story. I look forward to reading more of this.