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6/14/2012 c1 10Aerith Rei
This was actually really true for me,and probably for a lot of others too. I think girls and women all have this jealousy chip implanted in us that forces us to compare ourselves and read into those around us, and this illustrates it fearlessly.
6/9/2012 c1 this wild abyss
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]

This is a very strong piece. Your narrator is has a very powerful presence, which I like because it seemed to back up the honesty and emotion of the piece. At the same time, I did think she was a bit angsty and melodramatic, which I didn't like as much because it made her seem like she was whining (almost), but I guess that's sort of the point of this. Either way, it's a heartfelt and well-written piece.

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