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6/11/2012 c1 9Jkgiggle
how sad. Well written, short, simple. A glimpse at life, if you will. But a sad one. I hope whoever they are, they managed to allow things to happen again
6/10/2012 c1 thisaccountisclosedthanksbye
I really enjoyed this piece. In just a couple of hudnred words there's a really stronge sense of nostalgia and change. I liked the phrase 'rising early to eat with the sun'. Nicely done :)

-JB
6/8/2012 c1 this wild abyss
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]

This is a really interesting reflective scene. I like the way you portray the morning routine here because it's mundane and everyday, yet not. You turn it into something beautiful and poignant, which I suppose is rather the point. I also like the narrator's tone, especially in the last few sentences. It's almost bitter, yet not, and really speaks volumes in so few words. I love how you've managed to explain an entire relationship in such a short sequence. It's really cleverly done, on the whole.

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