for A Thought of War7/17/2012 c1 
10Valenteen
That blew me away. Really- it did. That poem was awesome. I love the two 'theme' type lines- What has this world become?/Where everyone is keeping score.
10ValenteenThat blew me away. Really- it did. That poem was awesome. I love the two 'theme' type lines- What has this world become?/Where everyone is keeping score.
6/10/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
WOW. VERY lovely and true. I love how thorough you expressed this piece and how truthful it was. You can visualize it perfectly. This should be read by all. Amazing job, keep it up :D
15Natari MirumuraWOW. VERY lovely and true. I love how thorough you expressed this piece and how truthful it was. You can visualize it perfectly. This should be read by all. Amazing job, keep it up :D
6/10/2012 c1 3GivingUpIsUseless98
Very nice poem!
I can't rhyme words! XD
It is about war! And I agree with you, it has brought nothing but pain with no gain!
Hey that rhymed!
Lol!
You sure are good at poems!
Can't wait for more! XD
Best Of luck,
GivingUpIsUseless98. XD
3GivingUpIsUseless98Very nice poem!
I can't rhyme words! XD
It is about war! And I agree with you, it has brought nothing but pain with no gain!
Hey that rhymed!
Lol!
You sure are good at poems!
Can't wait for more! XD
Best Of luck,
GivingUpIsUseless98. XD