for Heartbroken1/12/2013 c1 
216ygg
Very sad write, but you managed to express the emotional chaos of a broken heart quite well. Love the way you used rhyme. It really adds to the overall flow and tone of the poem. Well written!
216yggVery sad write, but you managed to express the emotional chaos of a broken heart quite well. Love the way you used rhyme. It really adds to the overall flow and tone of the poem. Well written!
11/19/2012 c1 21BrandNew
This is beautiful, and very sad but it's a great poem and I think it's what a lot of people go through.
21BrandNewThis is beautiful, and very sad but it's a great poem and I think it's what a lot of people go through.
7/31/2012 c1 49SkinnyLove203
Interesting :)
But don't be heartbroken. That dude was probably a prick anyway haha :) xx
49SkinnyLove203Interesting :)
But don't be heartbroken. That dude was probably a prick anyway haha :) xx
7/18/2012 c1 4whoshallJudgeAngels
*sniffs* That... was... beautiful. Very sensitive... you had me crying by the second stanza. :( :)
4whoshallJudgeAngels*sniffs* That... was... beautiful. Very sensitive... you had me crying by the second stanza. :( :)
7/16/2012 c1 34Jupsi
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Such a strong poem... Urgh, it's bittersweet to be reading this with interest, knowing it's been hard on you XD
34JupsiT_T
Such a strong poem... Urgh, it's bittersweet to be reading this with interest, knowing it's been hard on you XD
7/10/2012 c1 6catching.my.breath
Oh, my! This is byfar the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time-lovely to the nth degree! I love your style of wrting-very unique and creative
I hope to see more of your excellent writings in the near future! :) Keep up the good job, hun!
P.S. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my writings. I really love feedback. :)
6catching.my.breathOh, my! This is byfar the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time-lovely to the nth degree! I love your style of wrting-very unique and creative
I hope to see more of your excellent writings in the near future! :) Keep up the good job, hun!
P.S. I want to thank you for taking the time to read and review my writings. I really love feedback. :)
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
Love it! The way it rhymes is lovely, and it so poignant.
Love it! The way it rhymes is lovely, and it so poignant.
7/8/2012 c1 9Kizoku Tsuyoi
I like the feel the poem has: very emotional and true to life.
The first four lines...splendid.
I would prefer more imagery though.
Keep up the good work! :)
9Kizoku TsuyoiI like the feel the poem has: very emotional and true to life.
The first four lines...splendid.
I would prefer more imagery though.
Keep up the good work! :)
7/2/2012 c1 14Utada Rumiko
A couple of spelling mistakes, but the heartbroken message you gave came out nicely done. Good job.
14Utada RumikoA couple of spelling mistakes, but the heartbroken message you gave came out nicely done. Good job.
6/24/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Very very good. The only heartbreak I've felt is from a book that nearly killed me. Not the same I can imagine.
I did notice one really small mistake but that's it.
Loved it.
16Meadow FrostVery very good. The only heartbreak I've felt is from a book that nearly killed me. Not the same I can imagine.
I did notice one really small mistake but that's it.
Loved it.
6/18/2012 c1 6CrazyLittleGermanMiss
Great work on this.
this is true to life.
nothing worse than having your heart broken
6CrazyLittleGermanMissGreat work on this.
this is true to life.
nothing worse than having your heart broken