for My Oriental Mate11/7/2013 c1 
69AlysonSerenaStone
I found this story to be very entertaining. It made me laugh and was very cute. The world you set up here was very cool. Great work!
69AlysonSerenaStoneI found this story to be very entertaining. It made me laugh and was very cute. The world you set up here was very cool. Great work!
10/19/2013 c1 Nightesaur
Wow. Want to at least give us a snapshot of what how they meet later on? It would be like a one-shot with two chapters. lol.
Wow. Want to at least give us a snapshot of what how they meet later on? It would be like a one-shot with two chapters. lol.
9/7/2013 c1 thedeathrose
I loved it! But I wish you wrote more and made this in to a really book. I would love to see if they were ever going to see each other ever again.
I loved it! But I wish you wrote more and made this in to a really book. I would love to see if they were ever going to see each other ever again.
5/11/2013 c1 4Madame Jenn
I enjoyed this story. It was cute and light. And I kind of wish there was more.
BUT I wanted to point out that, in the US at least (I don't know where you're from), the term "oriental" is kind of offensive when used to describe a person. It has a history of marginalizing people from Asian decent. It CAN be used to describe things like artifacts and art, though.
I don't mean to be rude about it or anything, but I just wanted to let you know for future reference and stuff. There are lots of API and South Asian readers out there!
4Madame JennI enjoyed this story. It was cute and light. And I kind of wish there was more.
BUT I wanted to point out that, in the US at least (I don't know where you're from), the term "oriental" is kind of offensive when used to describe a person. It has a history of marginalizing people from Asian decent. It CAN be used to describe things like artifacts and art, though.
I don't mean to be rude about it or anything, but I just wanted to let you know for future reference and stuff. There are lots of API and South Asian readers out there!
4/24/2013 c1 The Odiferous Trump
I liked the story and the ending but I found it really worrying that he would attempt to kill an innocent child just because she was asian. O.o I hope that when his mate is older he will have become a much better person and that his mate has a fierce personality so she can beat the crap out of him if he does anything racist like that again lmao. :3
I liked the story and the ending but I found it really worrying that he would attempt to kill an innocent child just because she was asian. O.o I hope that when his mate is older he will have become a much better person and that his mate has a fierce personality so she can beat the crap out of him if he does anything racist like that again lmao. :3
1/1/2013 c1 opipl
You should create a sequel one-shot, where the baby is grown up and Wilheim and her find each other. That would be so amazing! I love this stpry and its my absolute favorite! Keep writing
You should create a sequel one-shot, where the baby is grown up and Wilheim and her find each other. That would be so amazing! I love this stpry and its my absolute favorite! Keep writing
12/16/2012 c1 Guest
Love this story! Would like to read more of it if possible :D
Love this story! Would like to read more of it if possible :D
11/5/2012 c1 2GraceSaader
definetly not racist. It was realistic and it captured the main characters thoughts quite clearly. Great job.
2GraceSaaderdefinetly not racist. It was realistic and it captured the main characters thoughts quite clearly. Great job.
11/3/2012 c1 dog loveR
Please write more - it is sooooooooooo goood, all your stories are really good!
Please write more - it is sooooooooooo goood, all your stories are really good!