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11/7/2013 c1 69AlysonSerenaStone
I found this story to be very entertaining. It made me laugh and was very cute. The world you set up here was very cool. Great work!
10/19/2013 c1 Nightesaur
Wow. Want to at least give us a snapshot of what how they meet later on? It would be like a one-shot with two chapters. lol.
9/7/2013 c1 thedeathrose
I loved it! But I wish you wrote more and made this in to a really book. I would love to see if they were ever going to see each other ever again.
6/5/2013 c1 2bubublacz
Oh please continue this! : I love the story.. huhuhuhuhu...
5/11/2013 c1 4Madame Jenn
I enjoyed this story. It was cute and light. And I kind of wish there was more.

BUT I wanted to point out that, in the US at least (I don't know where you're from), the term "oriental" is kind of offensive when used to describe a person. It has a history of marginalizing people from Asian decent. It CAN be used to describe things like artifacts and art, though.

I don't mean to be rude about it or anything, but I just wanted to let you know for future reference and stuff. There are lots of API and South Asian readers out there!
4/29/2013 c1 1animari93
I wish this was more than a oneshot.
4/24/2013 c1 The Odiferous Trump
I liked the story and the ending but I found it really worrying that he would attempt to kill an innocent child just because she was asian. O.o I hope that when his mate is older he will have become a much better person and that his mate has a fierce personality so she can beat the crap out of him if he does anything racist like that again lmao. :3
1/12/2013 c1 mia aurora
haha so cute.I kinda wonder if there will be continuation of this ?
1/1/2013 c1 opipl
You should create a sequel one-shot, where the baby is grown up and Wilheim and her find each other. That would be so amazing! I love this stpry and its my absolute favorite! Keep writing
12/16/2012 c1 Guest
Love this story! Would like to read more of it if possible :D
11/5/2012 c1 heal me forever
wow i always have athing to see dat mating wid babies :P i love it :)
11/5/2012 c1 2GraceSaader
definetly not racist. It was realistic and it captured the main characters thoughts quite clearly. Great job.
11/3/2012 c1 dog loveR
Please write more - it is sooooooooooo goood, all your stories are really good!
10/29/2012 c1 4R. Ficst
Ooo very cool! I wish there was a sequel or something. I really enjoyed this story and the way Wilheim came to feel affection for her. The story reads really nicely as a completed one-shot, but I feel so much potential for their story. Their are endless ways it could go!
9/24/2012 c1 1lastkissb8
Love the idea of this story! Hope to see a sequel in the future ;p
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