for My Oriental Mate6/11/2012 c1 ShadowInTheWriter
too lazy to sign in as always. I emailed you back! And I love this. It was so cute but I wish you could have made it longer like that he comes back and sees how different everything is. XD But it was so cute.
too lazy to sign in as always. I emailed you back! And I love this. It was so cute but I wish you could have made it longer like that he comes back and sees how different everything is. XD But it was so cute.
6/11/2012 c1 
1Montara
You left me wanting to know more about their love story. Hope you'll write a sequel. Thank you for sharing!
1MontaraYou left me wanting to know more about their love story. Hope you'll write a sequel. Thank you for sharing!
6/11/2012 c1 2Sonichii
Oh whooa, that was.. that was some good procrastination. I liked it and found it quite entertaining. The story as a whole was good. But one nitpick was the grammar and tenses.. throughout the story you kinda changed from past to present and just small things. Maybe you could re-edit it? It was only small things, but they kind of disrupt the flow of the story.. Apart from that, I loved it! Yay for the pup being Asian. By golly, you have to continue this story. Ahaha, please, please, please? It's so interesting and I love how you've included Koreans into this! (I'm not Korean.) Anywho, that really was a great read. Just maybe read over it again and fix some stuff up. (:
2SonichiiOh whooa, that was.. that was some good procrastination. I liked it and found it quite entertaining. The story as a whole was good. But one nitpick was the grammar and tenses.. throughout the story you kinda changed from past to present and just small things. Maybe you could re-edit it? It was only small things, but they kind of disrupt the flow of the story.. Apart from that, I loved it! Yay for the pup being Asian. By golly, you have to continue this story. Ahaha, please, please, please? It's so interesting and I love how you've included Koreans into this! (I'm not Korean.) Anywho, that really was a great read. Just maybe read over it again and fix some stuff up. (:
6/11/2012 c1 C.Turtle
Please tell me that there is more to this one shot because with your writing it would be one hell of a good story!
Please tell me that there is more to this one shot because with your writing it would be one hell of a good story!