for My Fiancee, My Boss12/29/2012 c3 meltingDew
The third chapter came and... I was blank. So much time had passed between the updates, it all flew over my head. Please try to update more often, I really loved the story. well Goodluck..! :)
The third chapter came and... I was blank. So much time had passed between the updates, it all flew over my head. Please try to update more often, I really loved the story. well Goodluck..! :)
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
It's interesting so far but shouldn't you explain what happened between them?
It's interesting so far but shouldn't you explain what happened between them?
6/19/2012 c1 
1Melting dew
Hey, just wanted to say that you are writing a good story, just the right amount of emotions and tension. I usually like the scenario of guilty man making up for his mistakes :). I cannot say more as it is just the first chapter, hope you update soon.
1Melting dewHey, just wanted to say that you are writing a good story, just the right amount of emotions and tension. I usually like the scenario of guilty man making up for his mistakes :). I cannot say more as it is just the first chapter, hope you update soon.
6/11/2012 c1 HeyyyitsPickle
Wow, I really liked this. Its just the first chapter and I love it. There's so much emotion. I hope you continue it! Its sure to be amazing
Wow, I really liked this. Its just the first chapter and I love it. There's so much emotion. I hope you continue it! Its sure to be amazing