for Would I smile?7/8/2012 c1 
22Gypsy Dream
I really feel like this poem connects to the reader well. It flows and the rhyme scheme helps keep a great beat to it. I really like it!
22Gypsy DreamI really feel like this poem connects to the reader well. It flows and the rhyme scheme helps keep a great beat to it. I really like it!
6/17/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
I love this poem so much! I can strongly connect with it, and I ask these questions myself too some/most times. It had a solid format, and it is truly a touching poem. The emotions you put into it was also shown. Outstaning job, keep it up :D
15Natari MirumuraI love this poem so much! I can strongly connect with it, and I ask these questions myself too some/most times. It had a solid format, and it is truly a touching poem. The emotions you put into it was also shown. Outstaning job, keep it up :D