for Confused7/2/2012 c1 lymli
I agree, people hide the truth even if you already knoe, but it's easy to pretend instead talkin bout it, XD
I agree, people hide the truth even if you already knoe, but it's easy to pretend instead talkin bout it, XD
6/17/2012 c1 
15Natari Mirumura
WOW. Strong emotions expressed, very strong ones. I think you should title this poem "Do They Not Know" Or "Do They Not Know I Can See?" This is a beautiful piece, that's so devistation. I can connect to it well. Amazing job, keep it up :D
15Natari MirumuraWOW. Strong emotions expressed, very strong ones. I think you should title this poem "Do They Not Know" Or "Do They Not Know I Can See?" This is a beautiful piece, that's so devistation. I can connect to it well. Amazing job, keep it up :D
6/15/2012 c1 3TheWritingDancer
I really like it! XD I just want to say: When youv'e got 'i' It should be a capital: 'I'. :D That is all though. Great poem!
3TheWritingDancerI really like it! XD I just want to say: When youv'e got 'i' It should be a capital: 'I'. :D That is all though. Great poem!