7/14/2012 c5 42thisismeCRAZY
these are all really good, i waited until i had read them all. you capture each person's emotions so well in each chapter. i understand about addictions because i have had issues myself and i still do.
anyway, very well written and i really look forward to reading more on this :)
these are all really good, i waited until i had read them all. you capture each person's emotions so well in each chapter. i understand about addictions because i have had issues myself and i still do.
anyway, very well written and i really look forward to reading more on this :)
6/29/2012 c4 3Still Season
Very sad, but definitely relays what (I think!) you're trying to say: Alcohol will take everything away from you :(
Can't wait for more!
-Mary
Very sad, but definitely relays what (I think!) you're trying to say: Alcohol will take everything away from you :(
Can't wait for more!
-Mary
6/29/2012 c3 Still Season
Very sad, but still lovely
'With a pink ribbion pined to her right boob' I think you mean pinned to her right boob :P
Loving this so far! :)
Very sad, but still lovely
'With a pink ribbion pined to her right boob' I think you mean pinned to her right boob :P
Loving this so far! :)
6/29/2012 c2 Still Season
I like how you constructed this poem, very clever! Although, you might want to make it a little more obvious?
I like how you constructed this poem, very clever! Although, you might want to make it a little more obvious?
6/29/2012 c1 Still Season
Lovely way to start the story and I love how it doesn't rhyme. Sometimes, poetry that rhymes seems to forced, but this was great! :)
Lovely way to start the story and I love how it doesn't rhyme. Sometimes, poetry that rhymes seems to forced, but this was great! :)
6/26/2012 c1 MEOW
IM A CAT MEOW
IM A CAT MEOW
6/26/2012 c1 WATERMELLON
TEEHEE I LIKE SPAMMING C:
TEEHEE I LIKE SPAMMING C:
6/26/2012 c2 MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAH
TEHEHEHEHEHEHEEHEHEHEEH
TEHEHEHEHEHEHEEHEHEHEEH
6/26/2012 c3 WATERMELLON
UHHHH I FORGOT
UHHHH I FORGOT
6/26/2012 c4 YOUR BEST FRIEND
IL IT SOO FREAKING MUCH *FLOPS* YEAAAAAA *SWAGGER WALKS INTO MCDONALDS*
MILKSHAKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHOCOLATE FLAVORED BOOO YEAAAAAA
ok bye 33
IL IT SOO FREAKING MUCH *FLOPS* YEAAAAAA *SWAGGER WALKS INTO MCDONALDS*
MILKSHAKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHOCOLATE FLAVORED BOOO YEAAAAAA
ok bye 33
6/26/2012 c4 WATERMELLON
SEEDS
SEEDS
6/26/2012 c4 MEGHAN LIKES
PRETTY BLUE BUTTON
PRETTY BLUE BUTTON
6/25/2012 c4 1BringxMexToxLife
Amazing, as usual. I like how you displayed how everyone can be affected with addiction, no matter what race/social status/class/gender, whatever, they are.
Update soon please!
-BringxMexToxLife
Amazing, as usual. I like how you displayed how everyone can be affected with addiction, no matter what race/social status/class/gender, whatever, they are.
Update soon please!
-BringxMexToxLife