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9/20/2012 c2 14thepheonixAndthepegasus
I really what to see where this story is going. Good so far :).
6/17/2012 c1 1KeinLosFahMeyye
Okay...double decker hamburger critique style

Good - Your story made sense

Bad - Your grammar is...off. In the title, summary, and story. FIX IT!

Good - I look forward to seeing other chapters

Bad - Not eye catching. I got bored. Even the summary didn't make me very excited.

Good - If you want you can msg me and I will give you a few tips

Hope you don't mind reading and reviewing a few of mine!

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