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3/18/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
I'm too stupid to talk about all the metaphorical meanings I see, but I happen to love this one. In fact, I quite like your style.
5/3/2006 c1 593Morwain
...interesting
4/29/2006 c1 Snowy Moon
the title fits perfect... I like the style... the way you used short lines then placed a long line at the end of each phrase... it was a great piece...
4/11/2005 c1 22Loup17
weeeeee nice, it almost feels like i can really hear what a dragon is thinking (dragons are cool) almost.

JA~
10/20/2004 c1 108Jo The Pirate
'the sun is darker than the shadow of his wings'
Gah! I love it. That has to be the best ending line to a poem I've ever read. I love the messages written between the lines as well. Beautifully done.
- Jo
5/13/2003 c1 13just like me
Awsome poem! I love dragons!
12/4/2002 c1 31shredmyties
i can see why this would be published, the details are entrancing and attractive (in my opinion)

the syllable's rythm lures the reader on, a special style you have, haven't seen it in others at all, that i must admit ^_^

luv~~*

Cin
8/15/2002 c1 3Kuroi Yosei
i love dragons and this poem was quite interesting. very pleasant!
8/12/2002 c1 wqwq
cool i like fantasy stuff
8/11/2002 c1 98hurtmushroom
it's great. i like the line 'his breath is music' best. great work
8/9/2002 c1 10Hikarineko Skadi
pretty weal an eagel was my old mascot was and i laughted at the painting on the front off the school. you know what they killed an eagel a long time ago just to put it in our trophy chase i don't go ther any more i go to a chater seee ya kari
5/29/2002 c1 37Jateshi
You have a very beautiful style. I feel honored that you would even like some of my older poetry. *grins*

You have a wonderful way with words Ellerfru
5/27/2002 c1 26moonbunny38
it's lovely. it's wooooonderful! all my reviews are starting to sound the same, but that's all i have to say.
5/20/2002 c1 1lady alpha
Cool. I like dragons. Aren't they fire creatures? You don't seem to mind. But then, dragons are wonderful creatures...
5/19/2002 c1 playergurl
Nice imagery. It's how I imagine dragons to be like. Are the last lines supposed to be so long?
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