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6/21/2012 c2 18Moonvibe
I like it. You've done a good job of presenting Alex's sudden dilemma and the mysterious attacker added a nice dose of intrigue. The "ify" moment with the rabbit was very well done too.

I'd say you have a good start on a very interesting tale:)
6/18/2012 c1 MarsterRoo
I like the plot so far. I would try to be a little more detailed in some areas especially where she wakes up in her room.

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