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10/22/2020 c54 tharushimethmini100
This story was amazing. I really loved reading everything. Thanks a lot for writing this precious gem
3/22/2018 c54 4rockspapersnscissors
I honestly loved this, but the ending?! It feels so short, you never brought up the priest who attacked Tai-ray afterwards, then the connection with Rys dad? Why bring it up if you end the story there? I want more lol
1/16/2017 c54 dragonflight203
I can't tell if the earlier one I sent went through, so please forgive me if this is a double post.

Started out reading the updated version, and was very happy to find a completed, if older version on the works list.

I very much enjoyed it - the K'nairi actually feel like a different species which so often isn't case. The resulting conflicting and attraction between them and humans thus comes off as very rule. The characters also felt very real, and I'm very invested in them.

I was also glad to see a story where the humans abide by/reluctantly go along with the other species' customs, rather than the other species come around to the humans'. Most stories have it go the other way, but it's seeing how humans adapt to such different cultures which is what I find most fascinating.

Seeing how the this story contrasts with the new version was interesting, and I'm looking forward to see how they continue to remain the same and diverge. Thanks for putting all of this up!
7/26/2016 c54 1liende
So I just rushed through this all because it was just so interesting and wow you did an amazing job with fashioning the K'nairi! Their culture and heritage were nicely conveyed, and also can I just say that I love Ryraso from the depths of my heart.

I actually started out quite liking Nel and Dyn and not caring all that much for Tai-ray, but he really grew on me. And then the chapter with their past came along and suddenly Tai-ray was my precious bird man child and I just wanted him to be happy with Ryraso (and, okay, the mean streak in me wanted to make Nel and Dyn suffer just a little bit for their selfishness and for hurting both Tai-ray and Ryraso, so there was that.) A'wendo and Eyeri and Hyermi and Ran'mosy (I might have spelt that wrong), on the other hand, were my darlings. All your characters were so interesting, and they had each their own distinct personalities, it was great to read and learn about each of them.

One thing would be that there seems to be quite a large number of grammatical errors? Simple things, really, like spelling mistakes and such, but there's quite an amount of them. Also, there's a habit of not ending your quotations with the appropriate punctuations like a full stop or comma. Rather, they're just cut off abruptly, and it is a bit jarring sometimes.

Hm what else. So I loved the story very much, definitely going into my 'read again' list. What bothered me the most about this was that there ended being a lot of unresolved plot points, such as the entire war that's been going on and the issue of the Royal Quad's numerous romantic problems (ie Tai-ray and Ryraso, although loved, come off as being just an afterthought in Nel and Dyn's minds, even more so than this mysterious potential lover;
3/27/2016 c54 Guest
The resolution was a bit rushed and incomplete. Needs another 10 chapters or so! And a sequel.
10/19/2015 c54 Ice Clad Shade
Fantastic Story!
I've read the entire story several times and love it!
Will there be a sequel following these characters?
4/20/2015 c54 3
Oh, just gonna end there? Alrighty then. Lovely story line, and the world you built was engaging. Thank you for writing this. Glad this exists.
1/6/2015 c54 Nope
Not the way it should have been ended, but its your story.
1/3/2015 c54 Guest
Love your story, I've been following for the beginning! I was wondering if you are going to make a sequel ? I really want here more about the world that you've made. I also wanted I see how their relationship goes...(sex!) too please
1/4/2015 c54 5ramblingrobin
Yay! I loved this story. Thank you for sharing it.
1/4/2015 c53 ramblingrobin
That was powerful and well-written.
1/4/2015 c52 ramblingrobin
Eep! I've been waiting for this! I feel bad for everyone. It will be good when it's all done and everyone can try to find normalcy of some kind.
1/3/2015 c54 2hazza1508
That's the end? Will there be a sequel I feel there's so much left 2 come from these guys and stuff that's unfinished.
1/3/2015 c54 2AngelFireDemon
1) that was an awesome story!
2) I can't wait to read arc 2 of collared kitten! That was a great story tooooo
12/29/2014 c51 Guest
Thanks for the update again! I really do love this story and the twists you put in it
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