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1Fairy Tales 97
It's a good start, please do continue. Sara-bara's review was a good one, and I can't add very much else to the review. Felix MUST NOT be too dominant, because that would very OOC. Keep up the work, and Happy Easter.
1Fairy Tales 97It's a good start, please do continue. Sara-bara's review was a good one, and I can't add very much else to the review. Felix MUST NOT be too dominant, because that would very OOC. Keep up the work, and Happy Easter.
3/24/2013 c2 Phoenix
Plz continue this story
Plz continue this story
9/25/2012 c1 1granity20
i definitely want to continue reading this even if i may be late in giving a comment in here...
1granity20i definitely want to continue reading this even if i may be late in giving a comment in here...
9/3/2012 c2 colombabianca
lol its cool its cool. i get the whole review thing, my friend and i co-write fanfics and we dont give shit unless we get some reviews either. this one time we had a chapter totally done and we didnt uploead it untill we got more reviews on the last one XD.
sooo anyway. i love this story, it just piques my interests. and let me tell you, i have some f-ed up interests. i think their should be some major BDSM involved. possibly whips. and maybe some chains. and also possibly ropes, vibrators, humiliation and role play. bbuuutt maybe thats just me. also some guro maybe, but again thats probably just me. but anyway, whatever you write please do it soon! i reviewed like a good puppy! pleeeaassseee? :D
lol its cool its cool. i get the whole review thing, my friend and i co-write fanfics and we dont give shit unless we get some reviews either. this one time we had a chapter totally done and we didnt uploead it untill we got more reviews on the last one XD.
sooo anyway. i love this story, it just piques my interests. and let me tell you, i have some f-ed up interests. i think their should be some major BDSM involved. possibly whips. and maybe some chains. and also possibly ropes, vibrators, humiliation and role play. bbuuutt maybe thats just me. also some guro maybe, but again thats probably just me. but anyway, whatever you write please do it soon! i reviewed like a good puppy! pleeeaassseee? :D
8/30/2012 c1 1Sara-bara
(I don't know if you remember me, but I'm back! ;))
I do agree with Darkside that you should post a few chapters before you start fishing for reviews because we are only seeing a small, tiny bit of the story. However, I do see the huge importance of detailed reviews when playing around with an idea for a story. I'm a bit rusty with my review skills, but here goes nothing:
I'm loving the concept of the story and with the nerd being older, the concept actually seems to work. So far the characters seem realistic, but in these stories where the "shy" nerd takes control, be careful with the actions you give to Felix. Don't make him too domineering; that wouldn't quite fit. Unless you are super crafty and make it fit... but I haven't seen enough to judge that. Anyway, moving on. Descriptions are lovely, keep it up. And never be afraid of erring on the more descriptive side. ;) The action is moving along at a semi-fast pace. That's not bad though! You caught the reader's attention (well, mine anyway) and introduced your concept. I'll try to keep up with reviews, but we'll see. College life is busy. Looking forward to the next chapter!
1Sara-bara(I don't know if you remember me, but I'm back! ;))
I do agree with Darkside that you should post a few chapters before you start fishing for reviews because we are only seeing a small, tiny bit of the story. However, I do see the huge importance of detailed reviews when playing around with an idea for a story. I'm a bit rusty with my review skills, but here goes nothing:
I'm loving the concept of the story and with the nerd being older, the concept actually seems to work. So far the characters seem realistic, but in these stories where the "shy" nerd takes control, be careful with the actions you give to Felix. Don't make him too domineering; that wouldn't quite fit. Unless you are super crafty and make it fit... but I haven't seen enough to judge that. Anyway, moving on. Descriptions are lovely, keep it up. And never be afraid of erring on the more descriptive side. ;) The action is moving along at a semi-fast pace. That's not bad though! You caught the reader's attention (well, mine anyway) and introduced your concept. I'll try to keep up with reviews, but we'll see. College life is busy. Looking forward to the next chapter!
8/30/2012 c2 10FluffyDeath
It's people like you, Anon, that make sensitive people like me...want to kill themselves.
Thank you for your kind words. I hope you're proud of yourself.
10FluffyDeathIt's people like you, Anon, that make sensitive people like me...want to kill themselves.
Thank you for your kind words. I hope you're proud of yourself.
8/30/2012 c2 Anon
FUCKING BITCH WHORE CUNT
THE FUCK
NO ONE REVIEWS YOUR GODDAMN STORY BECAUSE IT SUCKS BALLS DUMBASS
I SPEAK FOR EVERYONE WHEN I SAY YOU'RE A TOTAL DOUCHE
FUCKING BITCH WHORE CUNT
THE FUCK
NO ONE REVIEWS YOUR GODDAMN STORY BECAUSE IT SUCKS BALLS DUMBASS
I SPEAK FOR EVERYONE WHEN I SAY YOU'RE A TOTAL DOUCHE
8/29/2012 c2 DarksideOfTheMoon342
So far its good, for one chapter, anyway. You should write two or three before demanding reviews! :)
So far its good, for one chapter, anyway. You should write two or three before demanding reviews! :)