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10/19/2013 c1 4RainbowBookworm
Cute and well written, also a bit bittersweet since there's separation, but very very good!
4/14/2013 c1 4Na-Na-Nessa
I really liked this and the way you wrote it :) almost simple yet, so much in it. very nice :D
12/14/2012 c1 9MonkeyXMonkey
Hey, I read this and it's really good.
I just wanted to stop by and send my love since I know you have reviewed my stories and I wanted to repay the favor.
Just to let you know, Runway Royalty will be updated soon.
6/23/2012 c1 14VERGILthefallen
when i started this i thought i was going to hate it. I've read too many sad teen girl romances that some just make me shake my head in digust.

But i liked this. The angle you give, the distance of never giving any names made it personal but still impersonal. Though it was hard to follow at times since they are all only reffered to as freind, best friend and crush. The story itself is actually really nice with a belivable and relatable ending.

I will say that it felt choppy. I think you may have overused periods and cut all the sentences down to little chopped up bits that make reading it feel like a telgram. (blah blah stop. blah blah.)

But like i said aside from that and the sentence, "there we three new girls that year." in teh begining, i like your story. i give it a 4 out of 5, keep writing.

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