for Who Wants to Live Forever?5/13/2014 c1 Julianna
This is a very good essay, but I think you have too many facts.
This is a very good essay, but I think you have too many facts.
9/15/2013 c1 GG GREEN
I think this is a magnificent eesya good job. I'm looking forward to reading another..
I think this is a magnificent eesya good job. I'm looking forward to reading another..
2/6/2013 c1 alexis
lov the essay you inspired me two write a living forever essay
lov the essay you inspired me two write a living forever essay
11/19/2012 c1 Nancy Moore
Very well done and informative essay, thank you :-)
Very well done and informative essay, thank you :-)
8/23/2012 c1 
4whatthegreencarrot
This is a bit like a science paper, and god knows that I've written enough of those. Admittedly, this isn't the most engaging story I've ever read, but that's okay, because it has to do with mundane topics and sounds, for the most part, unfictional. On the upside, your grammar is impeccable, so that's good.
4whatthegreencarrotThis is a bit like a science paper, and god knows that I've written enough of those. Admittedly, this isn't the most engaging story I've ever read, but that's okay, because it has to do with mundane topics and sounds, for the most part, unfictional. On the upside, your grammar is impeccable, so that's good.
8/23/2012 c1 9Highway Unicorn
I really like this essay because you offer good points, such as overpopulation and unemployment. Those two factors alone are major issues to think about if one wants to live longer. The world needs death, in my view, or it will crumble. It wasn't meant to last forever, and if people live longer, they will just take up more of the Earth's resources.
I also like all the little numbers, percentages, and facts you add along with your essay because it helps me understand the issue more and it makes it more believable. :)
My only suggestion is to change statements like "Everyone wants to live longer..." You can't know for sure that "everyone" wants this, or feels a certain way.
9Highway UnicornI really like this essay because you offer good points, such as overpopulation and unemployment. Those two factors alone are major issues to think about if one wants to live longer. The world needs death, in my view, or it will crumble. It wasn't meant to last forever, and if people live longer, they will just take up more of the Earth's resources.
I also like all the little numbers, percentages, and facts you add along with your essay because it helps me understand the issue more and it makes it more believable. :)
My only suggestion is to change statements like "Everyone wants to live longer..." You can't know for sure that "everyone" wants this, or feels a certain way.
8/21/2012 c1 17J Author
Wow. I don't want to live longer just because I don't want to spend more time in our idiotic society than humanly possible. I never even thought about these possibilities. And these are just natural causes and financial problems. If everyone lived longer, there's no telling what the fatal crime rates will be like.
You have clearly done your research. I don't see anything to criticize negatively.
Great read!
17J AuthorWow. I don't want to live longer just because I don't want to spend more time in our idiotic society than humanly possible. I never even thought about these possibilities. And these are just natural causes and financial problems. If everyone lived longer, there's no telling what the fatal crime rates will be like.
You have clearly done your research. I don't see anything to criticize negatively.
Great read!
6/26/2012 c1 1Frozen Apple
I completely agre with you, I just wanted to point something out. We could solve our problems, controlling birt-rate. Society already has issues with it, as you brought out, so why not firstly settle matters with that? I am not against the idea of living if just little longer but everything must be considered fist and this is no different.
1Frozen AppleI completely agre with you, I just wanted to point something out. We could solve our problems, controlling birt-rate. Society already has issues with it, as you brought out, so why not firstly settle matters with that? I am not against the idea of living if just little longer but everything must be considered fist and this is no different.