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2Aletiah
Ivan is adorable here:
"I mean," I say kind of awkwardly, rubbing the back of my neck, "it was, like, basically on the way or whatever, and it's not like we have anything else to do, and you – I guess – I mean. Um." I pause for a second. "This is your fucking birthday present, okay, don't you dare ask me for anything now."
Ah, well, he always are. Except when he doesn't want Nico with them. I think Nico seems like a nice guy,but I guess Ivan just are a bit jealous? It seems like it :D
2AletiahIvan is adorable here:
"I mean," I say kind of awkwardly, rubbing the back of my neck, "it was, like, basically on the way or whatever, and it's not like we have anything else to do, and you – I guess – I mean. Um." I pause for a second. "This is your fucking birthday present, okay, don't you dare ask me for anything now."
Ah, well, he always are. Except when he doesn't want Nico with them. I think Nico seems like a nice guy,but I guess Ivan just are a bit jealous? It seems like it :D
6/28/2012 c2 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Ooh, I like the tension that's coming in at the end of this as we find out about Emerson, and then Ivan.
And they're so sweet, and Ivan's so funny XP
I love it, I really do XD
Sukix
Ooh, I like the tension that's coming in at the end of this as we find out about Emerson, and then Ivan.
And they're so sweet, and Ivan's so funny XP
I love it, I really do XD
Sukix
6/28/2012 c2 8seventhswan
I can't even begin to tell you how much I just want to pick up this story and cram it into my heart. I MEAN REALLY. It is such a perfect summer story and I laugh the whole way through because, Jesus, I want to be Ivan's best friend. I can be his wingwoman. I can be that girl with girly intuition who informs him that Emerson is adorable and available and just the best so Ivan should OPEN HIS EYES (and also his thighs) to him.
ahem. that is...if you're planning on taking the story in that direction. chapter 100 and all that.
No, but seriously, this: "Why is everyone a money-mongering whore?" about killed me. My stomach is sore from laughing. I just love Ivan, okay? I just do.
This chapter was so good, dear, SO GOOD. The way Ivan is so casual about his sexuality and Emerson is so uptight about it is just so perfect.
You know how sometimes, you read stuff, and you're like, "Hmm, that was pretty good ((smile))." and you're happy and everything, but then you move on with your day and everything stays the same? Well reading this fic IS NOT LIKE THAT. Reading this fic is like when you get super excited about a cute boy (or girl, or whatever) or new movie and you just have to tell everyone you know how good it is and how much they should agree with you and if they don't you'll hate them forever, but if they do, then you can spend hours chittering about it and being generally obnoxious and giddy. ((exhale)) I enjoy showing my love through run-on sentences of doom.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
8seventhswanI can't even begin to tell you how much I just want to pick up this story and cram it into my heart. I MEAN REALLY. It is such a perfect summer story and I laugh the whole way through because, Jesus, I want to be Ivan's best friend. I can be his wingwoman. I can be that girl with girly intuition who informs him that Emerson is adorable and available and just the best so Ivan should OPEN HIS EYES (and also his thighs) to him.
ahem. that is...if you're planning on taking the story in that direction. chapter 100 and all that.
No, but seriously, this: "Why is everyone a money-mongering whore?" about killed me. My stomach is sore from laughing. I just love Ivan, okay? I just do.
This chapter was so good, dear, SO GOOD. The way Ivan is so casual about his sexuality and Emerson is so uptight about it is just so perfect.
You know how sometimes, you read stuff, and you're like, "Hmm, that was pretty good ((smile))." and you're happy and everything, but then you move on with your day and everything stays the same? Well reading this fic IS NOT LIKE THAT. Reading this fic is like when you get super excited about a cute boy (or girl, or whatever) or new movie and you just have to tell everyone you know how good it is and how much they should agree with you and if they don't you'll hate them forever, but if they do, then you can spend hours chittering about it and being generally obnoxious and giddy. ((exhale)) I enjoy showing my love through run-on sentences of doom.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
6/27/2012 c1 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Oh I love this! and I love this line-
'But it's definitely all of these completely, one hundred percent nonexistent things that make Emerson say, "Are you on drugs?"'
-it's so funny!
I'm excited for more XD
Suki
Oh I love this! and I love this line-
'But it's definitely all of these completely, one hundred percent nonexistent things that make Emerson say, "Are you on drugs?"'
-it's so funny!
I'm excited for more XD
Suki
6/26/2012 c1 2Aletiah
Oh, I'm so happy you decided to make a long story :) This seems to be good. Your writing style is different and I love it. I hope you don't stop this in the middle, though, I promise I will follow it. Update soon!
2AletiahOh, I'm so happy you decided to make a long story :) This seems to be good. Your writing style is different and I love it. I hope you don't stop this in the middle, though, I promise I will follow it. Update soon!
6/26/2012 c1 8seventhswan
I am already in love with this, MY GOD. I love Emerson, I love Ivan. I love their names and I love their relationship and I already want them to MAKE SWEET LOVE TO EACH OTHER, GUH. No but really, I love Ivan's inner monologue about Emerson, I was seriously cracking up. Also, just, Ivan is SO ENDEARING! throwing around winks and flashes of his bare chest, boy can get it. Also, Emerson seems adorable. I like a man who loves his family. I'm sure Ivan loves a man who loves his family. ((wink))
Anyway, I am so unbelievably excited that you posted this and I cannot wait for more! Seriously: you know that feeling you get when you start a story that you just KNOW is going to be fun and cool and sweet and perfect? I have the feeling with this fic. ((dances around)) yay!
8seventhswanI am already in love with this, MY GOD. I love Emerson, I love Ivan. I love their names and I love their relationship and I already want them to MAKE SWEET LOVE TO EACH OTHER, GUH. No but really, I love Ivan's inner monologue about Emerson, I was seriously cracking up. Also, just, Ivan is SO ENDEARING! throwing around winks and flashes of his bare chest, boy can get it. Also, Emerson seems adorable. I like a man who loves his family. I'm sure Ivan loves a man who loves his family. ((wink))
Anyway, I am so unbelievably excited that you posted this and I cannot wait for more! Seriously: you know that feeling you get when you start a story that you just KNOW is going to be fun and cool and sweet and perfect? I have the feeling with this fic. ((dances around)) yay!