for Midnight Moon6/19/2013 c16 
5Max Sorrell
Aww, how sweet. I'm glad Daniel finally decided to trust Emory by the end of this. I liked how you also compared them to when the two first met. They have gone a long way. :)
5Max SorrellAww, how sweet. I'm glad Daniel finally decided to trust Emory by the end of this. I liked how you also compared them to when the two first met. They have gone a long way. :)
6/16/2013 c14 Max Sorrell
I really like Danel's sisters. I liked how you made them wise, but also gave them a sibling rivalry.
I really like Danel's sisters. I liked how you made them wise, but also gave them a sibling rivalry.
6/16/2013 c9 Max Sorrell
lol so we finally meet the infamous Michael. :P
I enjoyed the conversation with Aaron and Daniel at the start. the ass hole line made me laugh XD
lol so we finally meet the infamous Michael. :P
I enjoyed the conversation with Aaron and Daniel at the start. the ass hole line made me laugh XD
6/16/2013 c8 Max Sorrell
I'm not sure if I like Aaron much. I mean you had a feeling from the start that he was sort of controlling, but he has really got to loosen up. Then again isn't he just worried about Emory's safety? Must read more. XD
I'm not sure if I like Aaron much. I mean you had a feeling from the start that he was sort of controlling, but he has really got to loosen up. Then again isn't he just worried about Emory's safety? Must read more. XD
6/16/2013 c6 Max Sorrell
I was sort of disappointed with how easily the group got captured. They should have known that was a bad idea. :/
I was sort of disappointed with how easily the group got captured. They should have known that was a bad idea. :/
6/11/2013 c1 Max Sorrell
A boy and a girl, together in a cave... I must say, I don't think I've read much (if anything) like it. I was happy at first that she saved him, but once the guy tied her up, I'm beginning to wonder what type of person he is.
A boy and a girl, together in a cave... I must say, I don't think I've read much (if anything) like it. I was happy at first that she saved him, but once the guy tied her up, I'm beginning to wonder what type of person he is.
5/22/2013 c1 3H. Meadows
Im in the process of rereading since you updated. I loved the original and im loving the remake justas much! I wish youd have kept Ems named spelled Emeary becauee it just seemed to fi her really well. But thats just minor stuff.
Your writing has improved tenfold. im seriously impressd.
Oh and i might have accidentally done some fanart. :D
3H. MeadowsIm in the process of rereading since you updated. I loved the original and im loving the remake justas much! I wish youd have kept Ems named spelled Emeary becauee it just seemed to fi her really well. But thats just minor stuff.
Your writing has improved tenfold. im seriously impressd.
Oh and i might have accidentally done some fanart. :D
5/9/2013 c24 MagicWords
I love everyone's involvement in this final chapter! Aaron and Daniel have the best bromance and Em and Daniel are so sweet. What he says to her just melted my heart. She did do a lot for him, and I am so glad that he finally came around and acknowledged everything. I also like the stumbling colt comparison. It's so cute! :D
And alas, it ends again. I still think you should write a sequel. I see so much potential for action. Wouldn't it be cool if a new danger came to Elodea and wrecked havoc across the land. With their new positions, they would have to fight. And what if Em got her powers back somehow, or got new ones? What if Aaron got some power? What if Virtus had a back-up plan?
The possibilities...but I understand if you want to make this a stand-alone story. It is a great story, though. A real treasure. I am so glad that a year after reading it the first time that I can go back and reexperience all the old feelings that sort of launched our FP careers :D
And I still think you should try publishing. Just a suggestion :D
I love everyone's involvement in this final chapter! Aaron and Daniel have the best bromance and Em and Daniel are so sweet. What he says to her just melted my heart. She did do a lot for him, and I am so glad that he finally came around and acknowledged everything. I also like the stumbling colt comparison. It's so cute! :D
And alas, it ends again. I still think you should write a sequel. I see so much potential for action. Wouldn't it be cool if a new danger came to Elodea and wrecked havoc across the land. With their new positions, they would have to fight. And what if Em got her powers back somehow, or got new ones? What if Aaron got some power? What if Virtus had a back-up plan?
The possibilities...but I understand if you want to make this a stand-alone story. It is a great story, though. A real treasure. I am so glad that a year after reading it the first time that I can go back and reexperience all the old feelings that sort of launched our FP careers :D
And I still think you should try publishing. Just a suggestion :D