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3/18/2013 c9 Aubrey Adams
I really like the story. It's got a feel to it that I'm really attracted to. And I think you're describing the affects and other things that happen when you have a eating disorder like anorexia very well. This story really is good, and I hope you keep it up

Also, I just want to say that I hope you're feeling better with your self harm and self doubt and just things like that. I want you to know that I've done the things you have, and I am and have been through the things that you are going through and I want you to know that I'm here for you if you just need someone to talk to.

Much love,
Kat
11/4/2012 c9 Effy
Hey girl, I really hope you're having a better time. -cuddles-

I really liked this story. I'd like to see a new chapter soon. I'm interested in what's going to happen between Riley and Justin, Riley and Liz's friendship, Justin and that girl, and Riley and her illness.
I don't think Riley's dad is a bad person but Isabel -she's just a c-nt!

Have a nice week!
9/15/2012 c9 2charlie89
I loved this. I am really hoping that girl was best friends with his sister or something and he is just being there for her. Poor Liz, she didn't deserve that, Riley really took her anger meant for Justin, out on Liz. I cant wait for the next chapter. Look dont mind critical people saying bad things about your work. I am 23 and I think your work is great. If you got that published I would buy it and anything else that comes out after that. Once I like a persons writing I am hooked. I have read alot of books and I know when I see a real great piece of creative work. Hold your head up high hun because your work is really really fantastic. I honestly mean that. I will be waiting in terrible suspense for the next chapter :)
9/15/2012 c8 charlie89
Awh Riley's mother is so understanding. Justin is just amazing, he really likes her. I hope he doesn't break her heart. I dont think I could bare it. Isobel, do not get me started on her. She is a vindictive cow and a fake barbie doll. Riley's dad should get a handle, on his mouth all mighty of a girlfriend. :)
9/15/2012 c7 charlie89
I loved this. It is just so sweet. It is structured so well. I can picture everything clearly. Riley and Justin are just perfect for each other, its like fate brought them together. He is so great for her and vice versa. Poor Liz, I hope she meets someone decent, who deserves her. She seems like such a great best friend. I've known people with eating disorders, a cousin to be more exact. It is ahorrible thing to go through. I've nevr gone through it myself, Im not on the skinny side so I cant say I wouldn't have been tempted. The reason I never done anything so drastic like that is because of reading stories like these. Well done to making this more known to people. You're doing a great job on emphasing how bad eating disorders really are! Please review my story Secrets :)
9/14/2012 c6 charlie89
I really enjoyed it. The big L word, love, it was so sweet. Isabel is a nasty cow, I really hate her. She has no consideration for Riley. I would love Riley to stand up to her down along the bok and tell her where to go. That she doesnt need to worry about every calorie that goes in her mouth and to tell Isabel is she going to eat next to nothing and risk the health of her baby, just to make sure he or she comes out skinny. :)
9/14/2012 c5 charlie89
Awh such a cute first date. I dont like this Isabel, she is horrible. She sounds like abig part of Rileys eating disorder. No wonder with her putting her down like that. Nobody needs that kind of horrible criticism, with nothing but cruelty attached to it. :(
9/14/2012 c4 charlie89
Ok really enjoyed this. Cant wait to read about their date. I am hoping there is a first kiss in there. Great chapter :)
9/14/2012 c3 charlie89
I loved the chapter. Poor Justin though, my heart goes out to him. He was only a kid himself when that happened to his sister. Kind of a sharing a personal thing moment for Justin and Riley. He let her into his life a bit and why he had been such a bad person before he met Riley. Graet chapter. Please review my book Secrets. There is only one chapter up. I would really appreciate it. Thanks :)
9/13/2012 c2 charlie89
Oh now its getting interesting, I will be following this story regularly. It's caught my eye now and trapped my attention. I hope Riley and Justin get together, It would be so sweet and he seems like a genuinely great guy. Lets face it their are not that many that save a girl from being bullied and especially go out of their way. Please review my book. thank :)
9/13/2012 c1 charlie89
Sounds interesting. Great variety of words used to show how intenst the bully was and how affected Riley is by it all. Please review my book Engagement Bands. It would be really appreciated and I'll read your work too and review it. I'm going to read your next chapter now becuas egenuine love the story far but want a better insight into it by reading chapter one. :)
9/9/2012 c9 5wasauskyx
Oh my goodness! I feel horrible for Riley and for you-I hope that the self-harm is getting better. How could Justin just act like that?! That idiot! He should have told her who the girl was. I wanna know so please hurry up and get better, hon! UPDATE!
8/7/2012 c8 2isfuathliomgaeilge
Yupp I liked it! Sheesh isabel is such a bitch! U write her character well! Wud u please consider going into more detail with the story! I think it would help ur readers get more into the Story! Update soon anyway! K xx :D
8/7/2012 c8 5wasauskyx
Wow! I wanna start bawling haha please upsate soon!
7/22/2012 c7 wasauskyx
Oh yeah baby! I can't wait for over protective Justin and Mom to come out. Maybe Isabel can say mean stuff and then something happens that makes Dad realize what's up. I love the work you've done and I absolutely loved this episode because I can imagine myself being inside Riley's head and the things she did I would totally do, which is a good thing :)). UPDATE!
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