for Breathless: A World War II Novel2/3/2013 c16 
1CaciaCoon
Omg I am totally in love. The mind of a teenage girl is certainly something, isn't it. I would totally buy this as a book just to be like I I READ IT BEFORE YOUUUUU HA! To my friends.
1CaciaCoonOmg I am totally in love. The mind of a teenage girl is certainly something, isn't it. I would totally buy this as a book just to be like I I READ IT BEFORE YOUUUUU HA! To my friends.
2/1/2013 c16 Abbie
this was a great chapter :) I felt so relieved when Celia said she didn't have feelings for Jack!
this was a great chapter :) I felt so relieved when Celia said she didn't have feelings for Jack!
1/30/2013 c16 AxdriaXa
OMG Just beautiful. its the only way i could describe everything in this chapter. thank you soo much for the update. its 3mins to 1am and i'm up reading when i have school tomorrow so bye ( i will pay for this when my alarm goes off haha)
OMG Just beautiful. its the only way i could describe everything in this chapter. thank you soo much for the update. its 3mins to 1am and i'm up reading when i have school tomorrow so bye ( i will pay for this when my alarm goes off haha)
1/28/2013 c15 AxdriaXa
You know i feel guilty for not coming back earlier to catch up to this story. its simply breathtaking! everything is lovable and as much as i thought i would never like jack, i found myself wishing for him and charlotte to get together! this book is truly amazing. i'm going to try my best to come back to read your updates. the chapters were really great. very well done :D XXXX
You know i feel guilty for not coming back earlier to catch up to this story. its simply breathtaking! everything is lovable and as much as i thought i would never like jack, i found myself wishing for him and charlotte to get together! this book is truly amazing. i'm going to try my best to come back to read your updates. the chapters were really great. very well done :D XXXX
12/27/2012 c12 vicheyasr
I wholeheartedly agree with Sgarnett99, f this was a published book I would buy it too! I love imagining Jack and Charlotte curled up in bed, and the ending made my heart sing. I can't wait to learn of what is to to pass with your lovely updates. You're a wonderful writer!
I wholeheartedly agree with Sgarnett99, f this was a published book I would buy it too! I love imagining Jack and Charlotte curled up in bed, and the ending made my heart sing. I can't wait to learn of what is to to pass with your lovely updates. You're a wonderful writer!
12/14/2012 c1 2fortiespoet
That was a piece of quality writing right there. I can't wait to read the rest of this. If this was a published book, I would buy it.
Sgarnett99 c:
2fortiespoetThat was a piece of quality writing right there. I can't wait to read the rest of this. If this was a published book, I would buy it.
Sgarnett99 c:
12/14/2012 c11 AxdriaXa
Aww poor charlotte! Things never seem to stay good do they?! Hmm jack is soo confusing! He gets happy and then sqitches so fast its dizzying..oh well this chapter was amazing and illustrious. Fantastic job! ;-) xxx
Aww poor charlotte! Things never seem to stay good do they?! Hmm jack is soo confusing! He gets happy and then sqitches so fast its dizzying..oh well this chapter was amazing and illustrious. Fantastic job! ;-) xxx
12/8/2012 c10 8vicheyasr
This chapter was too good! I can't wait for more, and I think you should name the little girl Audria. (:
8vicheyasrThis chapter was too good! I can't wait for more, and I think you should name the little girl Audria. (:
12/7/2012 c10 MerlinFan
I think you should name the little girl Emilie. Great chapter! I alternate between wanting to strangle Jack and hug him. Love your stories.
I think you should name the little girl Emilie. Great chapter! I alternate between wanting to strangle Jack and hug him. Love your stories.
11/29/2012 c9 vicheyasr
I really got into this story and can't wait for another chapter and to see what happens! Is it just me or is someone jealous. XD *not-so-secretly hopes so*
I really got into this story and can't wait for another chapter and to see what happens! Is it just me or is someone jealous. XD *not-so-secretly hopes so*
11/22/2012 c8 AxdriaXa
Finally! Im so stopped acting like an idiot and actually cared about someone! I hope he doesnt go back to being an ass! Very good chapter, sorry i havent read in a while but im back! :) xx
Finally! Im so stopped acting like an idiot and actually cared about someone! I hope he doesnt go back to being an ass! Very good chapter, sorry i havent read in a while but im back! :) xx
8/31/2012 c7 Guest
this was kind of shorter, butI still liked it. And I realy liked it when helen came to charlotte's room. I'm very excited for the next chapter, so plaease write more sooon.
this was kind of shorter, butI still liked it. And I realy liked it when helen came to charlotte's room. I'm very excited for the next chapter, so plaease write more sooon.
8/31/2012 c6 Guest
I liked this chapt! jack seemed to really be coming around, but now it's apparent that he has issues with his parents. nice chap.
I liked this chapt! jack seemed to really be coming around, but now it's apparent that he has issues with his parents. nice chap.
8/31/2012 c5 Guest
ahh this chap gave me chills. It must have been so scary to have all those bombs around. But i'm glad that Jack was nice enough to help charlotte down to the basement and I'm glad everyone's okay...
ahh this chap gave me chills. It must have been so scary to have all those bombs around. But i'm glad that Jack was nice enough to help charlotte down to the basement and I'm glad everyone's okay...