for Breathless: A World War II Novel8/31/2012 c4 Guest
Jack is kind of a jerk, isn't he? ughh that sucks. I hope he doesn't stay like that. but I'm excited to see how the party goes.
Jack is kind of a jerk, isn't he? ughh that sucks. I hope he doesn't stay like that. but I'm excited to see how the party goes.
8/31/2012 c3 Guest
lewis is so sweet to his wife! It's so cute! and yhey're so nice to Charlotte, too. can't wait to read the next chap
lewis is so sweet to his wife! It's so cute! and yhey're so nice to Charlotte, too. can't wait to read the next chap
8/31/2012 c2 Guest
Aww i like topher now too. And his mom seems nice, as well. I can't wait to meet the family she's staying with .
Aww i like topher now too. And his mom seems nice, as well. I can't wait to meet the family she's staying with .
8/31/2012 c1 NameChristi
it's going to be so interesting to find out why Charlotte doesn't like her mom so much. But I loved luc! He was so sweet! I really hope she does see him again so that we can see him again too
it's going to be so interesting to find out why Charlotte doesn't like her mom so much. But I loved luc! He was so sweet! I really hope she does see him again so that we can see him again too
8/24/2012 c7 AxdriaXa
wow truly is an amazing story! jack. i really don't understand him at all! he changes soo quickly its wierd but it does make the story interesting too. love the new chapter, well done! :) x
wow truly is an amazing story! jack. i really don't understand him at all! he changes soo quickly its wierd but it does make the story interesting too. love the new chapter, well done! :) x
8/18/2012 c6 AxdriaXa
i love it! the last two chapters have been so amazing! umm lets see, topher and his mum have grown on me, i dislike jack because of his stupid attitude and the fact that he doesn't appreciate anything is even worse! how stupid of him to just thing of joining the war because of anger and not considering the consequences!unbelievable behaviour! update soon please :D xx
btw, what is a Beta?
i love it! the last two chapters have been so amazing! umm lets see, topher and his mum have grown on me, i dislike jack because of his stupid attitude and the fact that he doesn't appreciate anything is even worse! how stupid of him to just thing of joining the war because of anger and not considering the consequences!unbelievable behaviour! update soon please :D xx
btw, what is a Beta?
8/7/2012 c1 
3Mercyette
A very nice start to a story! I love the detail you add in your writing - I could see the characters and their surroundings clearly, which isn't something you often find on this site. I'm very interested in the history to Charlotte's family. I wonder what made her so distant with her parents and what exactly made her so close to her brother. I'll certainly have to read further. Good job!
3MercyetteA very nice start to a story! I love the detail you add in your writing - I could see the characters and their surroundings clearly, which isn't something you often find on this site. I'm very interested in the history to Charlotte's family. I wonder what made her so distant with her parents and what exactly made her so close to her brother. I'll certainly have to read further. Good job!
8/1/2012 c4 guymariangirl
i really love this story and the characters are wonderful! keep up the good work!
i really love this story and the characters are wonderful! keep up the good work!
7/31/2012 c4 AxdriaXa
aww love it! its so cute and dramatic at the same time
hmm jack, he's very complicated and i have a feeling that he's going to try to irk charlotte even more. i really like helen and lewis' character, like the parent figure charlotte's always wanted. can't wait for the next update. well done! :) xxx
aww love it! its so cute and dramatic at the same time
hmm jack, he's very complicated and i have a feeling that he's going to try to irk charlotte even more. i really like helen and lewis' character, like the parent figure charlotte's always wanted. can't wait for the next update. well done! :) xxx
7/26/2012 c3 AxdriaXa
wow.
i love the mystery of the drunk boy and the sad revelation of helen and lewis not having a daughter, this chapter took my breath away :) x
wow.
i love the mystery of the drunk boy and the sad revelation of helen and lewis not having a daughter, this chapter took my breath away :) x
7/21/2012 c2 AxdriaXa
aww this chapter was soo sweet! i'm really liking this story, can'[t wait for the next update :) x
aww this chapter was soo sweet! i'm really liking this story, can'[t wait for the next update :) x
7/15/2012 c1 AxdriaXa
Absolutely amazing! please please please update mon amie!(trynna be cool cause i know that word lol) xlove the story btw!
Absolutely amazing! please please please update mon amie!(trynna be cool cause i know that word lol) xlove the story btw!