for Black Willow1/22/2013 c1 
25AriaCreates
BLEH! I don't even get how you get positive feedback on this bullcrap. Seriously, why do you even comment on my poetry when you go and post this. You got a few big words just to screw with the reader's head and then you have random descriptions. Boo. Boo. Just...boo.
I shouldn't probably comment so hatefully on this, but you know it's true. I'm sorry sis, but I'm not going to cherry coat this bad poem.
Good luck with your future..
25AriaCreatesBLEH! I don't even get how you get positive feedback on this bullcrap. Seriously, why do you even comment on my poetry when you go and post this. You got a few big words just to screw with the reader's head and then you have random descriptions. Boo. Boo. Just...boo.
I shouldn't probably comment so hatefully on this, but you know it's true. I'm sorry sis, but I'm not going to cherry coat this bad poem.
Good luck with your future..
7/9/2012 c1 walls-have-ears
This was a very descriptive piece with very good lines there; "Her branches are the graceful dancers of the wind" was definately my favourite one. It easily created a mental picuture in my head. You have a talent for writing poems!
This was a very descriptive piece with very good lines there; "Her branches are the graceful dancers of the wind" was definately my favourite one. It easily created a mental picuture in my head. You have a talent for writing poems!