8/8/2012 c2 Me
This is amazing! I can't wait for more :) Your descriptions are right on, and I love the realalistic-ness of your characters, and the excitment of your plot. Something about your style of writing just sucks me in and keeps me reading. I really hope you continue this! I need to know what happens! Oh, and by the way, you really know how to start a story. It's always hard for me to find an opening line, even if I know the plot. Great job :D
This is amazing! I can't wait for more :) Your descriptions are right on, and I love the realalistic-ness of your characters, and the excitment of your plot. Something about your style of writing just sucks me in and keeps me reading. I really hope you continue this! I need to know what happens! Oh, and by the way, you really know how to start a story. It's always hard for me to find an opening line, even if I know the plot. Great job :D