for THE UNKNOWN FRIEND8/21/2012 c1 
1Exsomnis
Again, your story is good, although I noticed a few places where you replaced a letter with Q, but having the entire thing in caps lock can be a turn off for some people, it's also easier to make mistakes, and it gives the impression that everyone in the story is shouting at the reader.
1ExsomnisAgain, your story is good, although I noticed a few places where you replaced a letter with Q, but having the entire thing in caps lock can be a turn off for some people, it's also easier to make mistakes, and it gives the impression that everyone in the story is shouting at the reader.