for The Girl Who Played Robin Hood6/21/2020 c8 UWU its me
OMG this is like so good and i like. absolutely LOOOVEEE cayton omg like hes soooo hot and like. OMG her name is angel? OMG OMG OMG XDDDD THSTs so funny bc she like. isnt an angel. omg haha love it thanks update soon! XOXOX Hopefully cayton can claim her soon *wink* r u gonna write a lemon? im excited theyre my otp XOXOXOX
OMG this is like so good and i like. absolutely LOOOVEEE cayton omg like hes soooo hot and like. OMG her name is angel? OMG OMG OMG XDDDD THSTs so funny bc she like. isnt an angel. omg haha love it thanks update soon! XOXOX Hopefully cayton can claim her soon *wink* r u gonna write a lemon? im excited theyre my otp XOXOXOX
4/6/2013 c8 critic
Girl? You're REALLY annoying me here. I'm not one to make assumptions, but you make me think that you're one of those giver uppers. Oh yeah, eight chapters. No one cares anymore, whatevs. And if you're not a girl, which I seriously doubt, dude, finish the story. For OUR sake, Look at your frikin reviews. And your favorites. And your follows. FINISH DA STORYYYY GUUURRRLLL
Girl? You're REALLY annoying me here. I'm not one to make assumptions, but you make me think that you're one of those giver uppers. Oh yeah, eight chapters. No one cares anymore, whatevs. And if you're not a girl, which I seriously doubt, dude, finish the story. For OUR sake, Look at your frikin reviews. And your favorites. And your follows. FINISH DA STORYYYY GUUURRRLLL
10/3/2012 c8 person
I really like your story and plot, but there's something that just screams amateur writer. I know I can't help you, but I'm pretty sure you're an avid thriller reader. Can you try and read some. I really like Virals by Kathy Reichs, and the main character is really developed, with her own kind of dry humor. I'd really like Robin's personality to be developed like that. I mean, I can't connect to her because she has no faults, and nothing separates her from anyone else. You should try reading Legend by Marie Lu. I could tell that she was a first time author. There's just something kinda off. The reason I'm actually writing this review is because I really like it so far, and if you change it a lot (I know, I'm being mean) but keep the basic plot, you could probably even publish it.
I really like your story and plot, but there's something that just screams amateur writer. I know I can't help you, but I'm pretty sure you're an avid thriller reader. Can you try and read some. I really like Virals by Kathy Reichs, and the main character is really developed, with her own kind of dry humor. I'd really like Robin's personality to be developed like that. I mean, I can't connect to her because she has no faults, and nothing separates her from anyone else. You should try reading Legend by Marie Lu. I could tell that she was a first time author. There's just something kinda off. The reason I'm actually writing this review is because I really like it so far, and if you change it a lot (I know, I'm being mean) but keep the basic plot, you could probably even publish it.
9/25/2012 c8 Guest
ummm...so interesting story but i cant help but ask - wont people recognize that Hannah is always around robin hood...if she goes out all dressed like that with her sister? it wouldn't be hard to connect the two dots...just food for thought - cant wait til you update :)
ummm...so interesting story but i cant help but ask - wont people recognize that Hannah is always around robin hood...if she goes out all dressed like that with her sister? it wouldn't be hard to connect the two dots...just food for thought - cant wait til you update :)
9/22/2012 c7 Guest
please update.
please update.
9/24/2012 c8 Once-Apon-A-Dream-Come-True
Super ironic i find it funny that i was wacthing the disney version on robin hood this morning...lolz...
Can you do Zach's pov next?To show his reaction to seeing his sister whom he hasnet seen in 7 years!Update soon!:)
Super ironic i find it funny that i was wacthing the disney version on robin hood this morning...lolz...
Can you do Zach's pov next?To show his reaction to seeing his sister whom he hasnet seen in 7 years!Update soon!:)
9/17/2012 c7 Drew
I absolutely LOVE this story. can you please update more, just for my sake? wait. can i ask something? could robin and cayton go to the same school and get paired up for something? I don't know, a science project? I think the idea of the robin hood thing is just awesomeness. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
I absolutely LOVE this story. can you please update more, just for my sake? wait. can i ask something? could robin and cayton go to the same school and get paired up for something? I don't know, a science project? I think the idea of the robin hood thing is just awesomeness. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
9/11/2012 c7 
1prankster105
haha. i love this chapter. thanks for doing a different point of view. it makes it more interesting.
1prankster105haha. i love this chapter. thanks for doing a different point of view. it makes it more interesting.
9/2/2012 c7 Anonymous
I am in love with this so far! Keep it up! I hope to see more in the future!
I am in love with this so far! Keep it up! I hope to see more in the future!
9/2/2012 c7 214writtenworlds
I like how you wrote in his POV and I like your story A LOT! Keep writing 'cause your REALLY good! D Keep Being Awesome!
214writtenworldsI like how you wrote in his POV and I like your story A LOT! Keep writing 'cause your REALLY good! D Keep Being Awesome!
9/2/2012 c7 Unicornswag
I love this story soo much! I definatly like the idea of putting Cayton's view in and I cant wait to see what happens next! :)
I love this story soo much! I definatly like the idea of putting Cayton's view in and I cant wait to see what happens next! :)