for Another Zombie Infection
412/23/2012 c2 A. Nonymous1234
It seems like at least everybody has tried their hand in zombie apocalypse writing these days, but there is nothing wrong with that. in every story something is a little different, so I don't mind reading them. Now, for the content of the story, it seems a little choppy at parts, like where you make one sentence a new paragraph, for example at the end of chapter two. The end of that could have been warped into one paragraph. Overall I think the story is worth continuing, and I know I will read the rest.
It seems like at least everybody has tried their hand in zombie apocalypse writing these days, but there is nothing wrong with that. in every story something is a little different, so I don't mind reading them. Now, for the content of the story, it seems a little choppy at parts, like where you make one sentence a new paragraph, for example at the end of chapter two. The end of that could have been warped into one paragraph. Overall I think the story is worth continuing, and I know I will read the rest.
11/21/2012 c1 Lolitroy
Hahaha, I laughed when you mentioned how normal poor Dan was. I like the way you ended it, except for two things: None knew that it would only get worse... - See? If you had taken the two other points out it would've ended more, um, suspensefully? Whutevah.
But anyway.
P.S. What time is this set in? It gives off an air of long ago.
Hahaha, I laughed when you mentioned how normal poor Dan was. I like the way you ended it, except for two things: None knew that it would only get worse... - See? If you had taken the two other points out it would've ended more, um, suspensefully? Whutevah.
But anyway.
P.S. What time is this set in? It gives off an air of long ago.
9/4/2012 c2 walls-have-ears
I think it's going great so far, I like the descriptions in this. Just out of curiosity, is this set in the early 60s? Anyway, keep up the good work!
I think it's going great so far, I like the descriptions in this. Just out of curiosity, is this set in the early 60s? Anyway, keep up the good work!
7/17/2012 c1 walls-have-ears
I like this opening chapter, it caught my attention, and left me with questions. Update soon!
I like this opening chapter, it caught my attention, and left me with questions. Update soon!