for He Comes For You12/6/2012 c20 
1deducemedetective
Standing ovation. Right here. :D This is truly an awesome story. And the fact that you kept going with it and completed it is awesome as well. I did a double-take when I found out she was preggers. I guess I should have expected that, but it caught me way off guard! xD Hm, for Yale and Joanne's son, I would go with the name Caspian. It's unique and has a nice ring to it. It sounds... archaic. I would picture Caspian as the type of guy who, at first glance, looks almost exactly like his father at a younger age. But after closer inspection, one can see that his eyes more resemble the shade of his mother's eyes, and his hands are just a little more feminine than his father. Little things that make him look like Joanne, too. Gah, I just love this story so much. It almost makes me want to write a fanfiction for it! :D I'm so happy we met on here, I've really enjoyed following your writing. You've improved since the beginning of "Creeping In the Night," too. I hope you continue writing. I shall read and review if so!
-Erinn
1deducemedetectiveStanding ovation. Right here. :D This is truly an awesome story. And the fact that you kept going with it and completed it is awesome as well. I did a double-take when I found out she was preggers. I guess I should have expected that, but it caught me way off guard! xD Hm, for Yale and Joanne's son, I would go with the name Caspian. It's unique and has a nice ring to it. It sounds... archaic. I would picture Caspian as the type of guy who, at first glance, looks almost exactly like his father at a younger age. But after closer inspection, one can see that his eyes more resemble the shade of his mother's eyes, and his hands are just a little more feminine than his father. Little things that make him look like Joanne, too. Gah, I just love this story so much. It almost makes me want to write a fanfiction for it! :D I'm so happy we met on here, I've really enjoyed following your writing. You've improved since the beginning of "Creeping In the Night," too. I hope you continue writing. I shall read and review if so!
-Erinn
12/3/2012 c19 deducemedetective
Last chapter's next! Darn! I'll be sad to see this one end. But it's been awesome. :)
Last chapter's next! Darn! I'll be sad to see this one end. But it's been awesome. :)
11/25/2012 c18 Guest
Can't wait for the next chapter, sorry for not reviewing. I should go back and do this in my spare time! Great Chap!
Can't wait for the next chapter, sorry for not reviewing. I should go back and do this in my spare time! Great Chap!
11/3/2012 c14 sachinalani
O.M.G. So... CUTE! I love YaleXJoanna, super cuteness. D'aww.
O.M.G. So... CUTE! I love YaleXJoanna, super cuteness. D'aww.
10/30/2012 c13 5Stormygio
That awkward moment when you forget your fictionpress username and password and disappear for a long time...
Excellent, really excellent. I love this story. :D
To comment on a previous chapter, there are actually 3 Slenderman games that I know of currently up for download.
*tips imaginary top hat* And a good Halloween to you as well.
5StormygioThat awkward moment when you forget your fictionpress username and password and disappear for a long time...
Excellent, really excellent. I love this story. :D
To comment on a previous chapter, there are actually 3 Slenderman games that I know of currently up for download.
*tips imaginary top hat* And a good Halloween to you as well.
10/21/2012 c12 Sachinalani
Oh. My. Gawd. Did I just see an update in my Gmail, read this chapter, and review feeling like… like… just, wow. Yale, Yale, Yale. What have you done, son? (I'm a poet and didn't know it xD) but… gosh. Just… ugh. Why'd you do that!? Why!
You, my friend, you are just heartless.
Sach
Oh. My. Gawd. Did I just see an update in my Gmail, read this chapter, and review feeling like… like… just, wow. Yale, Yale, Yale. What have you done, son? (I'm a poet and didn't know it xD) but… gosh. Just… ugh. Why'd you do that!? Why!
You, my friend, you are just heartless.
Sach
10/21/2012 c12 1deducemedetective
Oooh, spooky! Don't worry about updating late, I've done the same. ." I've been bogged down with schoolwork. Nice chapter! :D
1deducemedetectiveOooh, spooky! Don't worry about updating late, I've done the same. ." I've been bogged down with schoolwork. Nice chapter! :D
9/18/2012 c11 1Tribute X
Oooh, that got my heart pounding! Nice twist by the way I wasn't expecting Yale of all people... I was 1/4 expecting totheark and 3/4 expecting Dexter... Write more soon!
1Tribute XOooh, that got my heart pounding! Nice twist by the way I wasn't expecting Yale of all people... I was 1/4 expecting totheark and 3/4 expecting Dexter... Write more soon!
9/11/2012 c11 1deducemedetective
AWWWWW SNAP. I seriously was NOT expecting him to show up in this chapter! Great job incorporating the game Slender into here, I really like it. But awesome work on catching me off guard! :D
1deducemedetectiveAWWWWW SNAP. I seriously was NOT expecting him to show up in this chapter! Great job incorporating the game Slender into here, I really like it. But awesome work on catching me off guard! :D
9/2/2012 c9 5Cretha Loesing
Poor Bethany!
Why the **** did her mom send her to a mental evaluation- she was only 5/6!
It's ridiculous, stupid ect... every kid seems a little strange/crazy when they're young.
her mother is such a *****ing *******. I hate Ms. Johnson.
5Cretha LoesingPoor Bethany!
Why the **** did her mom send her to a mental evaluation- she was only 5/6!
It's ridiculous, stupid ect... every kid seems a little strange/crazy when they're young.
her mother is such a *****ing *******. I hate Ms. Johnson.
8/18/2012 c7 2sachinalani
Oooooh! A package? Maybe it's flowers:3.
Nah, that's stupid. Anyway, scared the crap outta me. Especially the hand-prints. From TJAProjects? : ) great chapter! I can't wait to see what's next. :) yea, so, ummmmm… I'll see if the package is from Tothark!
2sachinalaniOooooh! A package? Maybe it's flowers:3.
Nah, that's stupid. Anyway, scared the crap outta me. Especially the hand-prints. From TJAProjects? : ) great chapter! I can't wait to see what's next. :) yea, so, ummmmm… I'll see if the package is from Tothark!