
4/30/2019 c11 Guest
A lot of internalized racism in this... good looking “for an Indian”? Plus a bunch of other facetious jokes about Indian food, people, etc. I’m not Indian but these stereotypes are unacceptable even if you’re Indian yourself - especially when they’re repeatedly juxtaposed with Nadine’s whiteness (eg kinda obsessive Indian mom vs Uber chill British aka white dad). Off with the colonial filters, please.
A lot of internalized racism in this... good looking “for an Indian”? Plus a bunch of other facetious jokes about Indian food, people, etc. I’m not Indian but these stereotypes are unacceptable even if you’re Indian yourself - especially when they’re repeatedly juxtaposed with Nadine’s whiteness (eg kinda obsessive Indian mom vs Uber chill British aka white dad). Off with the colonial filters, please.
8/25/2016 c18 Chie
I did not know you updated! But I read it and I loved it and gosh, how did I miss this?
/too busy squealing
I did not know you updated! But I read it and I loved it and gosh, how did I miss this?
/too busy squealing
9/14/2015 c16 Danny
So I made the mistake of reading this all over again. Now I can't wait for the next chapter, but I know that's going to take a loooong time.
Also, I realized I never left a review. What kind of best friend am I? This story deserves a lot more reviews!
I remember reading drafts of your work in school and falling in love with your writing. You were always the talented one, Suzy's little baby ;) The story has progressed so much since then. Gah, those were the times.
Missing you! xx
So I made the mistake of reading this all over again. Now I can't wait for the next chapter, but I know that's going to take a loooong time.
Also, I realized I never left a review. What kind of best friend am I? This story deserves a lot more reviews!
I remember reading drafts of your work in school and falling in love with your writing. You were always the talented one, Suzy's little baby ;) The story has progressed so much since then. Gah, those were the times.
Missing you! xx
5/3/2015 c16
9Chie Wisdom's Daughter
I am so late to this. And omg! Cam I just, I cant type with tthte excitement. THEY KISSED. I am so awfully blushy right now seeing my haiku. You did so much justice and more to it.,,,
Ahhhhhhh! I love this, you, everything!

I am so late to this. And omg! Cam I just, I cant type with tthte excitement. THEY KISSED. I am so awfully blushy right now seeing my haiku. You did so much justice and more to it.,,,
Ahhhhhhh! I love this, you, everything!
3/18/2015 c16
6Carmel March
THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER.
I wish it hadn't taken me so long to read! I am beyond thrilled! They kissed and it was amazing! I can't wait to see what happens - even if Nadine's "big mouth f***s things up all over again" :) Thank you so much for posting this chapter, it's made my day infinitely better and I can't wait for the next one!

THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER.
I wish it hadn't taken me so long to read! I am beyond thrilled! They kissed and it was amazing! I can't wait to see what happens - even if Nadine's "big mouth f***s things up all over again" :) Thank you so much for posting this chapter, it's made my day infinitely better and I can't wait for the next one!
11/23/2014 c15
9Chie Wisdom's Daughter
I am metioned! *dies from feels* AND I HAVE PERMISSION TO DO A FANFIC! HOW COOL IS MY LIFE!
I love the way you ended and began and kyyyaaa, I can't even with this chapter. It is so perfect, I think I died and then got resurrected from the feels. NadineXKian needs to happen so bad! dgabka flkzdsn ls d. *mutters incoherently*
And Nadine, that little sassy shit! Ahhh! I love her.
Kian, my sexy god! *melts*
Did I mention I love you too? Just so you know. XO Chie

I am metioned! *dies from feels* AND I HAVE PERMISSION TO DO A FANFIC! HOW COOL IS MY LIFE!
I love the way you ended and began and kyyyaaa, I can't even with this chapter. It is so perfect, I think I died and then got resurrected from the feels. NadineXKian needs to happen so bad! dgabka flkzdsn ls d. *mutters incoherently*
And Nadine, that little sassy shit! Ahhh! I love her.
Kian, my sexy god! *melts*
Did I mention I love you too? Just so you know. XO Chie
11/15/2014 c15
6Carmel March
Thanks so much for the extra long chapter! Amazing. I've been trying to find the time to read this and now that I finally have, all I want is more. I hope you get some time to write in your busy schedule! :) That's so neat you met Lauren Groff!

Thanks so much for the extra long chapter! Amazing. I've been trying to find the time to read this and now that I finally have, all I want is more. I hope you get some time to write in your busy schedule! :) That's so neat you met Lauren Groff!
10/20/2014 c14
9Chie Wisdom's Daughter
YOU CANNOT! YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! Yo are KILLING me! WITH TENSION! UUUUGGGGGh! I'm tempted to write a fanfic on these two just for the simple pleasure of GETTING THEM TOGETHER! Properly! C'mon now! A kiss isn't too much to ask?!
Apart from my drama, THAT MADE MY DAY! Lovely chapter as usual!

YOU CANNOT! YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! Yo are KILLING me! WITH TENSION! UUUUGGGGGh! I'm tempted to write a fanfic on these two just for the simple pleasure of GETTING THEM TOGETHER! Properly! C'mon now! A kiss isn't too much to ask?!
Apart from my drama, THAT MADE MY DAY! Lovely chapter as usual!
9/19/2014 c14
6Carmel March
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, loved the almost kiss! I can't wait for more. Good luck at university! :)

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, loved the almost kiss! I can't wait for more. Good luck at university! :)
9/13/2014 c13
4adalyn
Hi! Great chapter. The chapter got more interesting towards the end. I reckon Nadine is going to miss the European tour, isn't she?

Hi! Great chapter. The chapter got more interesting towards the end. I reckon Nadine is going to miss the European tour, isn't she?
8/25/2014 c1 p
Who lives in India? She's in Indonesia, duh. Just like Paulo Coelho when he tweeted "IND", made people confused whether it was India or Indonesia.
Who lives in India? She's in Indonesia, duh. Just like Paulo Coelho when he tweeted "IND", made people confused whether it was India or Indonesia.
8/14/2014 c13
6Carmel March
I love love loved this, can't believe she crashed! I hope she's okay. I was ecstatic at the length of this chapter - the more I get of this story, the happier I am :) I can't wait for more!

I love love loved this, can't believe she crashed! I hope she's okay. I was ecstatic at the length of this chapter - the more I get of this story, the happier I am :) I can't wait for more!
8/12/2014 c13 alchem
Thank you for sharing this story. I'm enjoying your bicultural plot. It's fresh and real.
Thank you for sharing this story. I'm enjoying your bicultural plot. It's fresh and real.