for Sharpe Enterprises - The Beginning
3/2/2019 c1 3Vicki Lawson
I really like this. Well-written and in play format!
1/5/2013 c6 3Pinkqueen
It's certainly interesting, but you need to work on your spelling and grammar. Also, it's a bit confusing that you changed "Mr. Sharpe" to "Neal" when you say who's speaking. I would recommend just saying Sharpe. You should continue.