for School Day Poems10/13/2012 c4 
15Natari Mirumura
Lovely in the way it's written, keep it up :D
Though, their is one error. You are missing an 'e' in cruel.
15Natari MirumuraLovely in the way it's written, keep it up :D
Though, their is one error. You are missing an 'e' in cruel.
7/20/2012 c1 Natari Mirumura
Very good and beautiful. Refreshing as well. Though, I think only one error. For the last line, I think you meant to type 'Until' But very beautiful. Amazing job, keep it up :D
Very good and beautiful. Refreshing as well. Though, I think only one error. For the last line, I think you meant to type 'Until' But very beautiful. Amazing job, keep it up :D