for Hidden Affection11/2/2013 c1 
2XxWriting MistressxX
Oh my word; it scares me how well I can relate to this fantastic poem. There's a guy I really like, but like the girl in the poem, I'm too scared to say anything. Anyway, my random babbling aside, this was an awesome poem. It flowed so well and was a delight to read. Thank-you for sharing such an awesome piece of work. :)
2XxWriting MistressxXOh my word; it scares me how well I can relate to this fantastic poem. There's a guy I really like, but like the girl in the poem, I'm too scared to say anything. Anyway, my random babbling aside, this was an awesome poem. It flowed so well and was a delight to read. Thank-you for sharing such an awesome piece of work. :)
12/28/2012 c1 13Revamp
This is a very deep and wonderful poem about hidden affection. You and Brokenm3 really pulled together to make a wonderful display of emotion. Great job on this poem.
13RevampThis is a very deep and wonderful poem about hidden affection. You and Brokenm3 really pulled together to make a wonderful display of emotion. Great job on this poem.
11/14/2012 c1 4Lolitroy
This poem is so saaaad . I can feel what the girl feels . and it's so sweet and capturing in a way words can't describe...! :D Even though I'm not one for romance, this was so sweeeeetttttt!
Just one thing: "Asking weather is real?" - whether, not weather. But anyway, we all get confused so it doesn't take away the awesomeness :D
4LolitroyThis poem is so saaaad . I can feel what the girl feels . and it's so sweet and capturing in a way words can't describe...! :D Even though I'm not one for romance, this was so sweeeeetttttt!
Just one thing: "Asking weather is real?" - whether, not weather. But anyway, we all get confused so it doesn't take away the awesomeness :D
10/18/2012 c1 UnpredictableMe
Great Poem! love it, all our loves stay a hidden affection! mine to be sure as well
Great Poem! love it, all our loves stay a hidden affection! mine to be sure as well
10/12/2012 c1 60AppleCrumble
Great piece! Loved it :-D
This is superb! Brilliant job! You should collaberate together again because this was AMAZING!
60AppleCrumbleGreat piece! Loved it :-D
This is superb! Brilliant job! You should collaberate together again because this was AMAZING!
7/30/2012 c1 14RinaJewelz
Really sad. And really vivid imagery I could almost see the girl. Great job :)
14RinaJewelzReally sad. And really vivid imagery I could almost see the girl. Great job :)
7/25/2012 c1 112Stonehartdreamer27
This is amazing! I can just picture the girl with a flower plucking the petals with all the emotions written in her eyes. I can relate to this very much, and I think it's wonderful!
112Stonehartdreamer27This is amazing! I can just picture the girl with a flower plucking the petals with all the emotions written in her eyes. I can relate to this very much, and I think it's wonderful!
7/25/2012 c1 10DappledKarma
Wow what a poor soul. The poem was very sad and it flowed very low. I especially loved the last two sentences.
10DappledKarmaWow what a poor soul. The poem was very sad and it flowed very low. I especially loved the last two sentences.