for Hidden Affection7/21/2012 c1 
16Meadow Frost
I would not have guessed two people wrote this together, it was that good. I only saw one mistake, but that was pointed out by someone else already.
16Meadow FrostI would not have guessed two people wrote this together, it was that good. I only saw one mistake, but that was pointed out by someone else already.
7/20/2012 c1 Purplemonkey123
This poem is so true I can relate to it a lot. Beautifully written! Good job!
This poem is so true I can relate to it a lot. Beautifully written! Good job!
7/20/2012 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
this was so so so so good. i really enjoyed reading it and the way you both had written it so well I would have never guessed that two people worked on this. The only thing that i have to critique is "asking weather it's real?" should be whether. Not weather. but other than that this was soooooo amazing. I loved it! The imagery in this was breathtaking and the way the petal was described that unlike the last one it made a sound stuck out the most in my mind and was simply beautiful! Great write you two! You should do another collab together because this was amazinggggg!
23Love A Mysterious Thingthis was so so so so good. i really enjoyed reading it and the way you both had written it so well I would have never guessed that two people worked on this. The only thing that i have to critique is "asking weather it's real?" should be whether. Not weather. but other than that this was soooooo amazing. I loved it! The imagery in this was breathtaking and the way the petal was described that unlike the last one it made a sound stuck out the most in my mind and was simply beautiful! Great write you two! You should do another collab together because this was amazinggggg!