for Let the Words Flow7/31/2012 c1 
15Natari Mirumura
Beautifully worded, and amazing cover picture. Lovely overall. Keep it up :D
15Natari MirumuraBeautifully worded, and amazing cover picture. Lovely overall. Keep it up :D
7/24/2012 c1 16Shauni Cooper
Another incredible piece. I like the emphasis on 'letting the words flow', reminding me what you constantly want to convey in your poem. The choice of words and descriptions were wonderful, very pleasant to read. I loved how each stanza stands out individually, and they each projected so much meaning and emotion. Quite an exquisite piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Keep on writing; you have lots of talent and potential. :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni
16Shauni CooperAnother incredible piece. I like the emphasis on 'letting the words flow', reminding me what you constantly want to convey in your poem. The choice of words and descriptions were wonderful, very pleasant to read. I loved how each stanza stands out individually, and they each projected so much meaning and emotion. Quite an exquisite piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Keep on writing; you have lots of talent and potential. :)
As always, keep writing!
-Shauni
7/23/2012 c1 4fufuroo13
As I was reading this, I could imagine it as a song on the radio. There was a definite rhythm, and I like it.
One thing though, you don't have to put punctuation marks at the end of every line. A poem is sort of supposed to flow from one line to next, and there doesn't necessarily have to be a pause. Your writing is so beautiful, but some of the commas distracted me from it.
I did like the repition of "Let the words flow". Very nice word choice.
Overall, brilliant poem! I loved it!
Fav Part: "Let the sky be your page,/And the Earth your muse."
4fufuroo13As I was reading this, I could imagine it as a song on the radio. There was a definite rhythm, and I like it.
One thing though, you don't have to put punctuation marks at the end of every line. A poem is sort of supposed to flow from one line to next, and there doesn't necessarily have to be a pause. Your writing is so beautiful, but some of the commas distracted me from it.
I did like the repition of "Let the words flow". Very nice word choice.
Overall, brilliant poem! I loved it!
Fav Part: "Let the sky be your page,/And the Earth your muse."
7/23/2012 c1 LsyBlurb
I love the continuity you used with the line "let the words flow" it made it that much better. This was very beautiful, amazing word choice and it had a lovely melody. Great job!
I love the continuity you used with the line "let the words flow" it made it that much better. This was very beautiful, amazing word choice and it had a lovely melody. Great job!