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11/27/2013 c1 Guest
I LOVE it, but the ending is a bit abrupt. When she says: "Anything bad that could ever happen, has happened this week", it sounds like a rejection, actually. So if I were Greg, I'd interpret it as one...see what I mean? But this is an ADORABLE story, and I LOVE it.
11/20/2013 c1 Bronzecat123
Aww. This story is so sweet. :) *Squeals*

great job on the story, I really enjoyed it. :D :D :D

I don't get the part where they both went to play in the water where you said Greg was a perfect mix of feminism and masculine? Isn't he only supposed to be masculine?
But anyways, great job XD

Plagiarizing is so bad and I can't believe people would even think about doing it. But I loved your story, thanks!

your reader,
10/31/2013 c1 Marta
Yaaay :) I'm soo happy you put it back! *sends you a ton of hugs*
6/2/2013 c1 1illest
i know it removed
but i think that the teaser you left is really good
so im favoriting it
sue me
im jk pls dont

question por favor
did you move to another site, or am i just ignorant and missing something in front of me?
its been known to happen
2/8/2013 c2 vsrhn
I understand and respect your feelings, i support you and i'll still follow you in the hope that someday you'll continue :) You're one fantabulous writer! May be you can try writing books!
1/4/2013 c2 1my princess ending
I just finished reading this. Oh My Gosh. Thank God I was able to read this before it was removed. Anyway, here's my review:

As an A Drop of Romeo reviewer, you're a pretty good writer. Maybe it's just me but I've always thought that people that review/judge others can't write as good, that's why they judge/review. Definitely proved me wrong. I hope that even though you are leaving fictionpress, you aren't leaving A Drop of Romeo. Where else am I gonna go looking for Supernatural/Fantasy stories?

12/22/2012 c1 4whatthegreencarrot
Okay. Okay. I'm too busy comparing how much better your stories are than mine to really review well, so sorry in advance.

Agh, that was pretty much perfect. No typos, no grammar issues, and you placed all your commas in the right spots (and thank god for that, because comma mid placement really bugs me...). I did find this one mistake, though:

[I made the mature decision to stick my tongue out at him and then I discretely flipped him off]
I think you spell discreetly like, well, "discreetly," and you should've put a comma between "him" and "and," because you need a comma between 2 independent clauses.

...I know, I know, I'm a grammar freak. Woe betide me.

Well, thanks for the amazing read. Wouldn't it be funny if Hailey and Jaime became besties?
11/11/2012 c1 Shippers Heart
This was so cute! i loved every single minute of it!
11/7/2012 c1 15newsoulz
This is so adorable! I'm a total sucker for friends turning into more, and the dialogue between Hailey and Greg was so cute.
9/23/2012 c1 Jasmine
That was a awesome story! :D I wish I can write something coolio like that! I like my best friend right now, but I have no idea if he likes me. Sometimes he denies it, sometimes he doesn't! God, boys are so complicated! LOL
9/1/2012 c1 53Stephlikeswriting
Aw that was adorable!
8/15/2012 c1 Guest
Hello I just want to say

For all the authors in which I have rudely copied and pasted their story I am so deeply sorry. Ihave learned my lesson and I hope that one day you can forgive me I feel awful knowing that I've upset so many people. Please forgive. I have taken down all 3 of thestories I have plagiarized. Although the Story Zach or Mathew was not plagiarized I have gotten the permission of the author Molly Goode to adopt it and continagreed and she agreed. If you saw on the top of thefirst chapter of Zach or Mathew you will see that I have given full credit to Molly Goode for the first chapter. Again I apologize deeply for all the trouble I have caused. Im very very very sorry. If you wish I will delete my account.
8/15/2012 c1 5Author-K-J-Lee
Aw that is so cute XD, I'm sorry to hear your work was plagiarised :(.
8/8/2012 c1 vsrhn
awww... Such a cute pair! Poor guy.. He had to bear all the annoying drooly Statements for someone else! If i were him, I would have bursted out on the first day itself! LOL Nice guy!
8/8/2012 c1 Laurieleigh92
I love the cover art for this story!

Excellent writing to make a really cute story! I hope you write more one shots soon!
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