for The Breakup Plan5/7/2013 c5 toffeema
update soon! pretty please!
update soon! pretty please!
4/2/2013 c5 
1Ceri Anne
So. Colin seems like a bit of a jerk, no waiting to see if she got home okay, and being far too friendly with her seeing as he has a girlfriend! How cute is Alex, though? I want me an Alex (my husband might not to too pleased with that though...)
1Ceri AnneSo. Colin seems like a bit of a jerk, no waiting to see if she got home okay, and being far too friendly with her seeing as he has a girlfriend! How cute is Alex, though? I want me an Alex (my husband might not to too pleased with that though...)
3/29/2013 c5 Midnight113
Thanks for updating, I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the amazing work!
Thanks for updating, I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the amazing work!
3/27/2013 c5 Choukou
Urggg, I just want to shake her and Alex for not seeing that they would be good together!
Urggg, I just want to shake her and Alex for not seeing that they would be good together!
3/23/2013 c5 2GoNe RoGuE
Wow, this story is very interesting and hypnotizing despite only having five chapters. Alex seems like a great guy who is deemed perfect and has flaws obviously. Nick seems like your typical brother and Nicky is kind of a bitch and slightly judgmental - but I hate stories with perfect characters - so unrealistic. I really hope you'll update soon and this is definitely gonna be my main source of literature entertainment on FP for right now. Update soon please!
-Hannah
2GoNe RoGuEWow, this story is very interesting and hypnotizing despite only having five chapters. Alex seems like a great guy who is deemed perfect and has flaws obviously. Nick seems like your typical brother and Nicky is kind of a bitch and slightly judgmental - but I hate stories with perfect characters - so unrealistic. I really hope you'll update soon and this is definitely gonna be my main source of literature entertainment on FP for right now. Update soon please!
-Hannah
3/21/2013 c5 6Carmel March
So happy to see an update for this story! I really love that you can write so many different kinds of romances (action-y, college-based, twentysomethings, etc) and they each have their own voice and unique characters.
This chapter was great and really showed the parallels between a guy like Collin and a guy like Alex. Collin seems okay now (well, not really, the warning signs are definitely there) and Nicky is justifying his actions as any girl would be a guy she likes. I'm so excited to see how her feelings and priorities change over the course of this story. Alex is just so cute and I love him.
Can't wait for more. Awesome job as always :)
6Carmel MarchSo happy to see an update for this story! I really love that you can write so many different kinds of romances (action-y, college-based, twentysomethings, etc) and they each have their own voice and unique characters.
This chapter was great and really showed the parallels between a guy like Collin and a guy like Alex. Collin seems okay now (well, not really, the warning signs are definitely there) and Nicky is justifying his actions as any girl would be a guy she likes. I'm so excited to see how her feelings and priorities change over the course of this story. Alex is just so cute and I love him.
Can't wait for more. Awesome job as always :)
3/20/2013 c5 Thess2002
Colin, what a two-faced ass! I love that you updated this story, I am super excited about it. I love the plot and cannot wait to read and find out more. I love that Alex worries about her and takes care of her where Colin does not... Please update soon! :-)
Colin, what a two-faced ass! I love that you updated this story, I am super excited about it. I love the plot and cannot wait to read and find out more. I love that Alex worries about her and takes care of her where Colin does not... Please update soon! :-)
3/20/2013 c5 londongirl123
I've been reading this story for the past hour and I love the storyline! I like the connections you have created between the characters but I'm a little confused. Is it Nicky that likes Collin? Because sometimes in the same conversation 'Col' is mentioned and I'm thinking its Nicky in the conversation. I can't wait to read more though :)
I've been reading this story for the past hour and I love the storyline! I like the connections you have created between the characters but I'm a little confused. Is it Nicky that likes Collin? Because sometimes in the same conversation 'Col' is mentioned and I'm thinking its Nicky in the conversation. I can't wait to read more though :)
3/19/2013 c5 12Life Love Sanity
Ahhhhh! I had such high hopes when Nicole wanted to change and not be sexually frustrated and she just happened to be drunk and with Alex. You foiled me. But I like it. Don't like Collin though... Hopefully he'll disappear soon :)
12Life Love SanityAhhhhh! I had such high hopes when Nicole wanted to change and not be sexually frustrated and she just happened to be drunk and with Alex. You foiled me. But I like it. Don't like Collin though... Hopefully he'll disappear soon :)
3/19/2013 c5 1funnechick
Wow...it has been awhile. And what's so sad is that you're updating your other story all the time, but this is the one I'm more interested in. So, I get jealous of the fans of your other one, haha! I'll try to give it a chance sometime though. ;)
In the meantime, I hope I'll be able to read another chapter of this story soon. I enjoy reading about the chemistry between two characters (even if it is not with the right guy); however, Colin really needs to watch how he behaves with someone other than his girlfriend.
1funnechickWow...it has been awhile. And what's so sad is that you're updating your other story all the time, but this is the one I'm more interested in. So, I get jealous of the fans of your other one, haha! I'll try to give it a chance sometime though. ;)
In the meantime, I hope I'll be able to read another chapter of this story soon. I enjoy reading about the chemistry between two characters (even if it is not with the right guy); however, Colin really needs to watch how he behaves with someone other than his girlfriend.
3/19/2013 c5 Agent 0
Oh man, they're so cute! I like how she's so comfortable around Alex - and trying to be cool around Collin. Remember those days well myself! I love this.
Oh man, they're so cute! I like how she's so comfortable around Alex - and trying to be cool around Collin. Remember those days well myself! I love this.
3/19/2013 c5 2FeliciaGray
I really love how your characters are so distinct. And this premise is interesting. Can't wait to see where you're going to take it. Please update soon. :)
2FeliciaGrayI really love how your characters are so distinct. And this premise is interesting. Can't wait to see where you're going to take it. Please update soon. :)
3/19/2013 c5 foreternity
yay! :) you updated, ahah awww poor nicky :s i think alex and nicky are cuter than nicky and collin :P he seems nicer and more caringg LOOL (: hope you'll update soon again! :)
yay! :) you updated, ahah awww poor nicky :s i think alex and nicky are cuter than nicky and collin :P he seems nicer and more caringg LOOL (: hope you'll update soon again! :)