for Touch of Fate2/15/2023 c1 Anonymous
Finally! Found something worth reading as it has been a while since I have been on FictionPress. The characters so far are interesting. I am not completely sold on Ardin, but will need to see where this leads.
Finally! Found something worth reading as it has been a while since I have been on FictionPress. The characters so far are interesting. I am not completely sold on Ardin, but will need to see where this leads.
2/15/2023 c2 KatTee
Ardin's character is starting to grow on me. I like how relatable she is and how headstrong she is. Loving the character development
Ardin's character is starting to grow on me. I like how relatable she is and how headstrong she is. Loving the character development
2/15/2023 c1 KatTee
Really enjoyed this first chapter! Can't wait to see what comes next )
Really enjoyed this first chapter! Can't wait to see what comes next )
7/10/2017 c4 Guest
Love love this story so much
Love love this story so much
4/3/2013 c4 
19Alaeryel
OMG Mystical-finally got to finish the catch up and DAMN IF THIS CHAPTER DIDN'T BLOW ME AWAY! I will be DYING for more here! It is just not getting EXTREMELY INTERESTING! I think I like Seth-ALOT-atleast for right now! I hope you aren't going to turn him into some pompous jackass but I CAN ALREADY SEE SOME DEVIOUS, MISCHIEVOUS machinations running thru his mind and I CANNOT WAIT to see what happens next!
19AlaeryelOMG Mystical-finally got to finish the catch up and DAMN IF THIS CHAPTER DIDN'T BLOW ME AWAY! I will be DYING for more here! It is just not getting EXTREMELY INTERESTING! I think I like Seth-ALOT-atleast for right now! I hope you aren't going to turn him into some pompous jackass but I CAN ALREADY SEE SOME DEVIOUS, MISCHIEVOUS machinations running thru his mind and I CANNOT WAIT to see what happens next!
4/2/2013 c3 Alaeryel
OH BLOODY HELL Mystical-for some reason I knew his reaction was going to be bad when he found out who she was but really-did he have to be such a MAJOR JACKASS? This is going to be quite and INTRIGUING and FANTASTIC STORY! YOU CAN RUN CHACE BUT YOU CANNOT HIDE!
OH BLOODY HELL Mystical-for some reason I knew his reaction was going to be bad when he found out who she was but really-did he have to be such a MAJOR JACKASS? This is going to be quite and INTRIGUING and FANTASTIC STORY! YOU CAN RUN CHACE BUT YOU CANNOT HIDE!
4/2/2013 c2 Alaeryel
Ok Mystical-this chapter brought tears to my eyes especially the last little bit with Ardin and her father-VERY VERY TOUCHING AND EMOTIONAL! Chace can be alittle 'sh**' can't he but who can blame him! His grandfather is a conniving old codger though and I LOVED THIS!
Ok Mystical-this chapter brought tears to my eyes especially the last little bit with Ardin and her father-VERY VERY TOUCHING AND EMOTIONAL! Chace can be alittle 'sh**' can't he but who can blame him! His grandfather is a conniving old codger though and I LOVED THIS!
1/29/2013 c4 ItzieBitzie
cant wait til your next update! You should be getting more reviews for this awesome story! I'm luvin' Chace... He seems so dark n handsome
cant wait til your next update! You should be getting more reviews for this awesome story! I'm luvin' Chace... He seems so dark n handsome
1/29/2013 c1 ItzieBitzie
Great start with a pretty decent plot. Hope this story gets better
Great start with a pretty decent plot. Hope this story gets better
1/29/2013 c4 NoriNoriChan
Seth seems to be more likeable compared to Chace. He is more warm and much more flirtier and less brooding. I sense some trouble coming up. Cannot wait for you to update again!
Seth seems to be more likeable compared to Chace. He is more warm and much more flirtier and less brooding. I sense some trouble coming up. Cannot wait for you to update again!
1/29/2013 c1 NoriNoriChan
Great prologue! I'm liking Ardin as a character. She seems quite strong headed
On to the next chapter _
Great prologue! I'm liking Ardin as a character. She seems quite strong headed
On to the next chapter _
1/2/2013 c3 Kimmygurl
Spotted a few mistakes in this chapter but other than that it was a good writing!
Can't wait for more :)
Kimmy
Spotted a few mistakes in this chapter but other than that it was a good writing!
Can't wait for more :)
Kimmy
1/2/2013 c3 xLara.Tx
i'm really liking this Ardin but it seems like she is getting into a lot of unfortunate situations.
Seth seems like a charmer haha. Can't wait to see where this goes!
UPDATE SOON
i'm really liking this Ardin but it seems like she is getting into a lot of unfortunate situations.
Seth seems like a charmer haha. Can't wait to see where this goes!
UPDATE SOON