for To be different7/26/2012 c1 
15CARAMELLDANSEN9009
This... this poem made me cry. I-I don't understand this, but it did! Uh, this really is helpful for kids, you know, so they know they aren't alone. :D
I love it, it's very awe-inspiring. :)
15CARAMELLDANSEN9009This... this poem made me cry. I-I don't understand this, but it did! Uh, this really is helpful for kids, you know, so they know they aren't alone. :D
I love it, it's very awe-inspiring. :)
7/26/2012 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
This was INSPIRING. The imagery in the lines "Yes. I chase my troubles./I catch them one at a time./Every time I do, they split./They split into multiple little strands./Until I'm left/Stranded in a lie/Wondering if truth exists." was the most amazing imagery i have ever read. It was so interesting so amazing. the way it was painted in my mind... I got lost in it. this was a truly a gem in a jewelers closet. Great write.
23Love A Mysterious ThingThis was INSPIRING. The imagery in the lines "Yes. I chase my troubles./I catch them one at a time./Every time I do, they split./They split into multiple little strands./Until I'm left/Stranded in a lie/Wondering if truth exists." was the most amazing imagery i have ever read. It was so interesting so amazing. the way it was painted in my mind... I got lost in it. this was a truly a gem in a jewelers closet. Great write.
7/26/2012 c1 LsyBlurb
Beautifully written! You really captured all their conflicting emotions, and I could really connect with it which takes skill on behalf of the writer. I love it! I love your word choice and the flow.(: great job!
Beautifully written! You really captured all their conflicting emotions, and I could really connect with it which takes skill on behalf of the writer. I love it! I love your word choice and the flow.(: great job!