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7/31/2012 c1 7LovelySocks
That has to be one of the best poems I've ever heard/read. It was from the heart, subtle, well-explained, and you used appropriate adjectives. I loved every line and I think you explained your friend very well. You showed us the inner layers of her (I'm assuming this from the "Corinnaā€¯ at the beginning) heart and then we watched as she was torn apart, and then revived. In particular, my favorite lines are the first two and from 23-31 and I know that that's a long span, but I couldn't bring myself to narrow it down any further. Fantastic, amazing, phenomenal and extraordinary job. KEEP WRITING!

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