for Lost Child7/31/2012 c1 
7LovelySocks
That has to be one of the best poems I've ever heard/read. It was from the heart, subtle, well-explained, and you used appropriate adjectives. I loved every line and I think you explained your friend very well. You showed us the inner layers of her (I'm assuming this from the "Corinna” at the beginning) heart and then we watched as she was torn apart, and then revived. In particular, my favorite lines are the first two and from 23-31 and I know that that's a long span, but I couldn't bring myself to narrow it down any further. Fantastic, amazing, phenomenal and extraordinary job. KEEP WRITING!
7LovelySocksThat has to be one of the best poems I've ever heard/read. It was from the heart, subtle, well-explained, and you used appropriate adjectives. I loved every line and I think you explained your friend very well. You showed us the inner layers of her (I'm assuming this from the "Corinna” at the beginning) heart and then we watched as she was torn apart, and then revived. In particular, my favorite lines are the first two and from 23-31 and I know that that's a long span, but I couldn't bring myself to narrow it down any further. Fantastic, amazing, phenomenal and extraordinary job. KEEP WRITING!