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7/30/2012 c1 33TertleWacks
This is very intelligent. You're a deep thinker! (that's a good thing) I like this kind of writing. And I understand what you meant in the last line. It made me think, too.
It's interesting how every person on this earth is different! I always think why my personality is the way it is. I think about why other people's personalities are the way that they are. It can get so confusing. A lot of the time, I can't even put into words what I'm thinking.
Anyways, this poem is pretty amazing. Good work ;D
7/30/2012 c1 45Onearmwonder21
I love this poem- it was so heartfelt. The last line was a nice touch by the way.
7/30/2012 c1 16John-the-H-is-silent
Good poem. I think a lot of people can relate to this though not many would admit it. I don't always like who i am, yet some days i love it. The last line sounds fine and makes perfect sense. Why are we the way we are? It's a good question to ask. I think we all need to adopt a new way of thinking. Yes, we're separate individuals, but at the same time we all share the same basic needs.

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