for Everlasting Naivety7/31/2012 c1 
5recycledpaper
Great idea. I'd encourage you to speak to some. You'll be surprised how much more complicated their lives and thoughts are. But the general feeling of your poem came through.
5recycledpaperGreat idea. I'd encourage you to speak to some. You'll be surprised how much more complicated their lives and thoughts are. But the general feeling of your poem came through.
7/31/2012 c1 2thisnameisnowtaken
It's such a nice thought... And oh how I wish I believed in it...
Beautiful little poem - do I have to say that it's original?
2thisnameisnowtakenIt's such a nice thought... And oh how I wish I believed in it...
Beautiful little poem - do I have to say that it's original?