for Love Bites8/5/2012 c1 
8Olena Light
Hmm...assuming you're talking about rough sex? If so, it's very sexy but in an uneasy, dark sort of way. The speaker seems hesitant in his/her emotions. Conflicted, but I feel like if you'd expanded the poem he/she would choose the path of ignorance to the last question. At the same time, the question is very thought-provoking: 'is this a fight?' Never thought of sex being a fight (the consensual kind anyway...) My mind is spinning right now haha I really enjoyed the simplicity of it and how it leaves just enough for anyone to build their own interpretations :)
8Olena LightHmm...assuming you're talking about rough sex? If so, it's very sexy but in an uneasy, dark sort of way. The speaker seems hesitant in his/her emotions. Conflicted, but I feel like if you'd expanded the poem he/she would choose the path of ignorance to the last question. At the same time, the question is very thought-provoking: 'is this a fight?' Never thought of sex being a fight (the consensual kind anyway...) My mind is spinning right now haha I really enjoyed the simplicity of it and how it leaves just enough for anyone to build their own interpretations :)
8/3/2012 c1 15WordsTasteLikeCaramel
Ohhh again, another brilliant one (I envy your rhyming, it makes it all sound so melodiac and smooth, like a jazz song) it's difficult to make rhyming sound sensitive and profound and make it vivid all at the same time (or maybe that's just me, with my terrible rhyming skills) and give it a message. The most important thing to me in a poem is flow. If I can't process it and let it slip through my mind in a quick string of images and ideas, I don't like it very much. But you've succeeded in doing it twice now!
Honestly? AWESOME.
(Into my favorites you pop, lovely poem :D)
15WordsTasteLikeCaramelOhhh again, another brilliant one (I envy your rhyming, it makes it all sound so melodiac and smooth, like a jazz song) it's difficult to make rhyming sound sensitive and profound and make it vivid all at the same time (or maybe that's just me, with my terrible rhyming skills) and give it a message. The most important thing to me in a poem is flow. If I can't process it and let it slip through my mind in a quick string of images and ideas, I don't like it very much. But you've succeeded in doing it twice now!
Honestly? AWESOME.
(Into my favorites you pop, lovely poem :D)