for My Fall From Grace7/22/2013 c1 
2Diane Young
Wow. I'm wary of poems the rhyme (not usually my thing and can come off as cutesy), but this is really beautiful and powerful. You've conveyed a lot of meaning and feeling in these lines.
2Diane YoungWow. I'm wary of poems the rhyme (not usually my thing and can come off as cutesy), but this is really beautiful and powerful. You've conveyed a lot of meaning and feeling in these lines.
8/3/2012 c1 15WordsTasteLikeCaramel
I really loved the wording in this (It rhymes! Really, honestly, to me, that is awesome, since I can't rhyme for toffee :D)
"I've taken my few falls from grace/ Danced with darkness, loved the taste/ Told the mirror to forget my face/ Because I create my own reality"
I loved these first few lines, especially "Danced with darkness, loved the taste", for some reason, it just really stuck with me, kinda like static cling (except in a really good way). It was that brilliant. Truly. I enjoyed this poem and it's going to find a very nice, cosy nook in my favorites :)
15WordsTasteLikeCaramelI really loved the wording in this (It rhymes! Really, honestly, to me, that is awesome, since I can't rhyme for toffee :D)
"I've taken my few falls from grace/ Danced with darkness, loved the taste/ Told the mirror to forget my face/ Because I create my own reality"
I loved these first few lines, especially "Danced with darkness, loved the taste", for some reason, it just really stuck with me, kinda like static cling (except in a really good way). It was that brilliant. Truly. I enjoyed this poem and it's going to find a very nice, cosy nook in my favorites :)