for Nightmares and Realities10/3/2012 c1 
7Wingsoflinesia
Just a tad freaky, if you ask me. I'm no chicken, I'm just commenting. The only thing I find wrong is that you need to add a new chapter!
7WingsoflinesiaJust a tad freaky, if you ask me. I'm no chicken, I'm just commenting. The only thing I find wrong is that you need to add a new chapter!
9/10/2012 c1 3Miss Clementine
It would really improve the creepy feeling of the dream if you locked in on the reader's every sense and put even more detail into your description of the feeling. Being as in depth as possible is really good when dealing with the supernatural, and you just need a little more oomph behind it. I really love the concept, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
3Miss ClementineIt would really improve the creepy feeling of the dream if you locked in on the reader's every sense and put even more detail into your description of the feeling. Being as in depth as possible is really good when dealing with the supernatural, and you just need a little more oomph behind it. I really love the concept, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
8/31/2012 c1 1415
I think this is very good. This has a lot of potential. For that I'm following this :)) Can't even wait for the next part
1415I think this is very good. This has a lot of potential. For that I'm following this :)) Can't even wait for the next part
8/24/2012 c1 TU-Fingers
This is fantastic! I hope it continues like this because all the suspense has been built up to something really dramatic and creepy; perfect!
This is fantastic! I hope it continues like this because all the suspense has been built up to something really dramatic and creepy; perfect!
8/19/2012 c1 EmilyRo132
I just love this! It's a really good opening chapter, and its so well written, can't wait to read more:D
I just love this! It's a really good opening chapter, and its so well written, can't wait to read more:D
8/15/2012 c1 2WJEvans
I really like the concept of this story, it seems like it will be very interesting. Her name is also fantastic- Kaia Cross- so catchy. I now the "This is a dream" is done stylistically but maybe, after the first few, you should change it. Possibly adding a "just" or shorting it to "a dream" to make it more dramatic.
Can't wait to read more!
2WJEvansI really like the concept of this story, it seems like it will be very interesting. Her name is also fantastic- Kaia Cross- so catchy. I now the "This is a dream" is done stylistically but maybe, after the first few, you should change it. Possibly adding a "just" or shorting it to "a dream" to make it more dramatic.
Can't wait to read more!
8/9/2012 c1 2laurah1236
I reallyyyyyyyy like your story, It's very well written. And I just really like the entire concept even though I don't really like supernatural type stuff this one seems interesting. Can't wait to read more. :)
2laurah1236I reallyyyyyyyy like your story, It's very well written. And I just really like the entire concept even though I don't really like supernatural type stuff this one seems interesting. Can't wait to read more. :)
8/5/2012 c1 2AmericanBeauty-AmericanPsycho
I love all the detail! You're an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write this. For me!(:
2AmericanBeauty-AmericanPsychoI love all the detail! You're an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write this. For me!(: