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10/17/2013 c5 1leavesfallingup
Matt's intentions might be good, but he has too much faith in the school bully. Syrup (the name says it all) would say anything necessary to cosy up to Matt... and then turn on Cindy later anyway. Matt should be smarter than that, but he has probably been friends with Syrup forever, so he doesn't see the evil side as easily. Besides, the way that he played this with Cindy was cruel and unthinking.

I am increasingly curious about Cindy's dad. I suppose that he will play an integral part in this story? And will the necklace identify her as the secret daughter of some noble family?
10/17/2013 c1 leavesfallingup
It is good that someone in that school is willing to step in. If bystanders would just find courage then bullies would never have power over others.
10/15/2013 c1 ecossine
Hey ! English isn't my first language so I didn't understand everything, but I liked the beginning :D It is really good (But it was a bit predictable that a boy would help her hehe :D) But it's cool anyway :D Keep going.
6/2/2013 c4 xXSamurai-98Xx
5/31/2013 c4 1DrieSummersDaughterOfApollo
I love it so far. Can't wait to read the next chapters!
1/6/2013 c3 3xXSamurai-98Xx
UPDATE! :))) lol my homework xD
11/5/2012 c2 yesika0512
I love Merida's hair! -sorry I'm just lacking of words to say.

Ryan Maxwell intrigues me. Maybe because I secretly like bad guys? hahaha :D
11/4/2012 c2 1parisi
Hey, your story is entertaining so far! The characters seem very lively, and the names are interesting! (Syrup...is that inspired from someone you actually know?)
11/4/2012 c2 3xXSamurai-98Xx
Lol Merida xD haha! :)) I like this chappie xD :) update soon! :D
8/17/2012 c1 yesika0512
Mirame I'll be straightforward okay?

I DON'T LIKE THIS STORY...to end this way...hahaha :D

"Did I got you for a second there?"

Love the story! Easy to follow, easy to read, and exciting.
8/10/2012 c1 xXSamurai-98Xx
KYAAAA! MY HOMEWORK :DDDD lol :)) update soon :D

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