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1/12/2013 c8 4Ney13
Thanks for starting the petition. I'm worried about my story, so thanks:)
1/12/2013 c8 23rd Bookworm
Ahhh that's cute
1/12/2013 c8 conti siegel
I love it! So now update!
11/13/2012 c7 1Lily806
I like your story, I just finished reading this chapter and it is very well written. I really like the story.
10/24/2012 c7 23rd Bookworm
ooo, and the plot thickens, like pizza dough, ok that was a lame joke, point is awesome chap update soon pls
10/23/2012 c7 Brightyellow
Your story is brilliant.
The charcters made me smile and the realism is just as i like it. I have dozens of questions from these chapters that I've read. How old is Holly? What will happen next? How will Luke's character change? Etc.
I hope you follow through and finish this story as if is just amazing or maybe as Hatchet would say 'shit-tastic!'
10/22/2012 c6 16Nacht Graves
wow. i love it! found this on the tumblr under the lights and glad i did :P
i love Hatchet's character as a sarcastic, blunt, ever swearing teenager with a slight dark history. He reminds me of myself and a few of my not quite sane friends. Luke's character is interesting as well, and the way you made his speech all proper with no contractions, though a little robotic and slightly awkward to read for me, really helps emphasize his character of a proper, sheltered rich kid.
There are a few places where the word flow is a bit awkward because of a slight misspelling that is easily fixed with an extra proofread but otherwise doesn't take away from the story. example: last line of this chapter "a single thought resonated in him mind" and i think there was one or two in the first two chapters as well.
Wow that was long... anyway i honestly really like it so far so update soon! :D
10/5/2012 c6 18FreekyDisaster18
YAY! We have a defeat! They're getting on with each other! Awesome! Let's hope he does stop acting like a princess eventually... Seriously, who doesn't want to hang out at a pancake place all day?! HEAVEN. This was an amazingly written chapter and I can't wait for chapter seven :D
10/5/2012 c5 FreekyDisaster18
N'aw, I'm glad they're making an effort with each other... slightly. What a toss pot of a landlord... Let's see what comes from this! :)
10/3/2012 c6 1Amy90
Cool chapter! :D Keep going and update soon (pleeeeze)! Can't wait.
10/2/2012 c6 23rd Bookworm
It was a good chapter though
9/23/2012 c5 3rd Bookworm
Please update soon.
9/13/2012 c4 18FreekyDisaster18
I ADORE HATCHET. WHY IS THERE NOT A HATCHET IN MY LIFE?! I mean, come on! The dude has a super cool and quirky name, he's a barrel of laughs and I just want to keep him in my back pocket!

Right, enough falling in love with your fictional characters (because seriously, I don't need to fall for any more of those...), this story is simply getting better and better! I can't wait for the characters to interact more, or to see what Holly has planned for dinner. I'm sure they're all going to be great friends and have awesome adventures together.

9/13/2012 c4 1Amy90
I LOOOOVE Hatchet, he's just hilarious! :DDDD
9/12/2012 c4 HERsheKISSxoxo
Great story so far! I hop holly and luke become bf and gf!
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